whaley

@liberty

oh man. I have had some of the WORST sprains ever!! One took almost two months to heal!
Roland’s is not as severe, and he has been off of it for four days and as you can see he starts limping when they travel again.

Oooh! I love Dian!

you just love sailor characters. 😝

Is that why you like him? Or for other reasons too?

As for what w…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Yeah, that would be a cool scene! I’ll have to try to see if I can fit something like that into the story.

@theshadow

Okay, great! 😊

@godlyfantasy12

Ohhh, I’m kind of in a similar position as I’m writing the second draft of a WIP. I’m keeping some scenes, shuffling some around, and adding new ones. It’s been a fun juggling act 🥴😂

I don’t know how much of a plotter you are, but having a big picture idea of your plot is going to be super helpful. You don’t necessarily…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Sorry, didn’t get tagged yesterday. I think Linus has a valid concern about the scene with Julian and Dian, but moving the scene where Julian shares the Gospel with him to a day or so later would fix it, in my opinion.

I think it was nice to see Julian argue with God a little bit. It’s slightly a different reaction than you…[Read more]

@theshadow

NICE!!

I really like it! I had hopes for Dylan and they seem to be coming through! Yay!!

@keilah-h    @linus-smallprint

So, keilah likes the scene that you have a problem with, linus! This is great. 🤣

Here’s an idea. What if I shift it a little so that the conversation happened a day or two after they had already been on the ship? Do you think that would work?

@raxforge @whalekeeper

Celarent

Oh, wonderful, a winged boy. As if this weren’t peculiar enough. Celarent squirmed. The greatest thief in Laerylia was not supposed to end up in such embarrassing situations. How disgraceful. Not to mention weird. “Let me go! I’m not one of whoever they are! I don’t know who you or bird boy are!” He reached for his knife.

@loopylin now how did I forget to tag Whaley *virtual facepalm*

@theducktator

“Did you see the news?!” – Phillip

“Yeah! I am so glad that THE ducktator approved of us!” – Polly

“And we get teddy bears?! How cool!” – Pristina

“Yeah! And it’s all because of Palmer!” – Petunia

“Really?! Wow, I am so honored.” – Palmer blushes

“What the avocado, why does the queen of ducks hate me so much?!” – Piper

“Hm……[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

On behalf of the entire duck kingdom, I would like to thank Potato news 64 for this great honor. Except for Piper. We don’t approve of Piper. With utmost gratitude, and no small amount of concern, the kingdom of the ducks would like to offer foreign aid in the the form of emotional support teddy bears, and our deepest…[Read more]

“Woah. Look out, everybody,” she joked to the rest of the nearby empty hallway.

Nearly empty. Ugh, I hate that I can’t edit typos after a certain time limit.

People must be hungry or something

@theducktator

I have one other character wandering about. Could she join the Foreign Literature class whenever that happens?

Yeah she can join! Currently there’s just a few characters in the classroom chatting until the lesson starts.

Liko

“Well, you have the whole day ahead of you to make new friends. And with baking this good, I doubt it will…[Read more]

@rae I can’t remember if Felicity and Chase ever had a conversation before

@rae

Felicity 

Felicity strolled down the hall towards her first class of the day, late but not running. She paused as a middle school aged boy trudged past her, buried deep in his dark hoodie.

“Woah. Look out, everybody,” she joked to the rest of the nearby empty hallway. “Rain storm incoming.”

She smiled at the boy, brow creasing in the slig…[Read more]

@loopylin

exactly 😭

@raxforge @koshka

The twins

Ellie shrugged. “It’s at seven. Whole school’s excited for it. Has been for days.”

Eddie leaned forward suddenly in her seat, eyeing Sypher. “How are doing that? The air around you ‘s all weird. Do you have superpowers?”

Why is everyone’s reaction to these little potatoes’ existence violence? Lol

Also, I am very honored to receive the couch potato award 😌

@whalekeeper wants to read this too probably