Enid

@savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint @theshadow

Ok, here is Turin. I am seriously cringing right now. Ugh. I HAVE to redo him.

@linus-smallprint

I’m just basically looking for structure edits right now. This is my 4th draft, and after I go though this I’ll pass it on to my grammar/formatting editor and then move forward into getting it published. so, basically trying to make sure the story is solid, the characters are 3D, and the plot line is interesting and…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

so sorry, I had to find her.

This is from three years ago, so it’s not very good. i should really redo her.

@ellette-giselle

IS THAT EVEN A QUESTION?!?

of course! I would love love love to!!!!!!!!1

@whalekeeper

First of all thank you so much!!! <3 you always know exactly what to say!

But if I’m overwhelming you or if you’re tired of listening to my rants, just let me know XD XD

I don’t know what public school is like… however you should think about who your friends are, and why the idea of leaving school gives you bad feelings. Is it mos…

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@savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint @theshadow

Anyone, (specifically Sara because this is her favorite.) Want to see a drawing of Sabina?

@whalekeeper

I’m glad you’re feeling better btw! ❤️ And I promise I am not thinking badly of your writing behind your back. I sometimes feel that way about my own writing, and I have self-esteem/anxiety issues myself about being secretly hated. I think you are a very capable writer on KP and definitely braver than me for sharing this pro…

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@jonas

I take it this chapter is before some of the ones you already wrote, since it shows them preparing to leave the house? Or are they moving a second time?

Huh? I’m confused. They’re moving a second time. They never moved the first time, because they already lived in Wrallethom Heights before the Pythonos made everyone else move there too. So…[Read more]

@whalekeeper nerds rule

I guess I have a hands-on tool I haven’t said before: I created a game for my story, with hole-punch pieces on graph paper and ten pages of notes on how they work and move and stuff, and I use that to simulate battles. It adds some realism (so the good guys don’t win every time when the odds are stacked against them) and…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Girl, seriously. What could possibly have to take blame for 🤣 You are at fault for nothing!! You don’t have to share your writing, me or somebody else asks or doesn’t. <3

Yw

Yeah… same. Story of my life rn. Y’know that song by one republic “I lived”? every time I miss a opportunity to have a experience, I remember the lyrics.…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Wow I don’t think anyone’s asked me that XD I appreciate it. I don’t share a lot of my stuff as you know, but sure, I’ll keep you in mind! ❤️

XD they probably haven’t asked because you’re a little more private with your writing. I figured I’d just let you know I’m interested <3

@whaley @freed_and_redeemed @keilah-h @loopylin @anyone…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I’m so honored you consider me experienced lol

@whalekeeper

I LOVE THIS IDEA

I’m a super visual person so this might help a lot!

@whalekeeper

I’m just gonna vent a little bit…don’t feel like you have to answer XD XD

I just have to get it all out of my system haha

I’m trying to make a hUgE dEcIsIoN that could affect my life in so many ways.

I’m trying to decide if I’m going back to public school or not this year.

Like, part of me wants to keep going just to be able to…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

*tries not to cry* 😭😭😭

Whaley you’re the best 💗💗💗 thanks girl

@whalekeeper

I’d probably not be convinced that they were actually dying until the last minute.

@esther-c

Ooh, yes.

Anyone interested in reviving this topic?? I can put together a list of prompts for August if anyone else is interested… 👀

@whalekeeper

Wow, that’s a hard question. Ermm…

I think I’d immediately start thinking of a way to keep them here longer. Is there a way that they don’t have to die? It might take me a little bit to come to terms with the fact that there’s not. Honestly, at that point, I think I’d start trying to spend as much time with them as I can and make as…[Read more]