Enid

@rae

It’s tipping down so the tail will hit the ground first. He was trying to go up to escape the shelling but he wasn’t fast enough. it’ll start flipping as it goes down, but for now the engine killed and it’s falling.

does that make sense?

You’ll find out chapter 20 or so.

@hybridlore

Yay, Mandin is back 😂

Did you really miss him that much!? he was only gone for…three and a half chapters!

He’ll be sticking around a while until something happens…oh man I just realized how much you’re gonna hate me XD

@ellette-giselle

I think I’m ruining it, and it’s really nice but why is the plane flying up? It should be going down. Am I missing something?

@rae

Thank you rae!

@mineralizedwritings

Wow! The time hassle really paid for itself! That’s just epic!

@linus-smallprint

(In other words, is he trying to be disciplined in fighting his worry, but forgetting to be dependant on God to help him (which seems quite likely since he is struggling with doubt itself))

100% Yes.

I know I’m not much of a romance guy, but even I wanted to see this in developed scenes instead of a summary. I want to see t…

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@linus-smallprint

Nah, just call him Alan. That’s his name after all. I mean, people don’t refer to you as “The Canadian” or “The guy with the wired way of measuring fences” or, “The guy with a part time job” lol.

They call you Justin, or Linus. those are your names/nicknames/online-names. but they are still your names.

Just call him Alan.

I…

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A horse stable? MA be a war reenactment at a museum? A fair?

@rae

Okay, thank you! Yay, Mandin is back 😂 That’s totally fine! As long as you can keep writing from that point, you can always come back and change it once you’re done.

@theducktator That was so funny! Great job! I like the Shadow’s idea of her trying to break into a zoo and rescuing some birds, lol. Maybe an amusement park? A concert? A DMV?

@keilah-h @linus-smallprint

OK, I’m back. new section, and would really love feedback on this because It’s still in a stage where I would be wil;ling to change or tweak things.

It was a long week of prayer before Aaron spoke to Sabina about the idea of marriage. Sabina was very surprised, but Aaron had never seen her so joyfully since her…

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Here’s one I did for one of my books. This is Even, my pilot. He’s not having a great day at the moment. But I sure love the angle!!!

@linus-smallprint

PS.

Any thoughts on my music styles? lol.

“Real men don’t use sprinkles.”-my brother

@keilah-h

what??? lol

They make sense with context. Sort of.😂

@keilah-h

Don’t worry, I’m not inclined to get gory. It’s basically just gonna be threats.

@whalekeeper

Okay, makes sense.

@linus-smallprint

I liked this!! I don’t know if I mentioned this yet, but when you refer to Alan as “the soldier” it kinda throws me, especially since 1) he has a name that we know, and 2) this is something you kinda just started.
other then that, no complaints.
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