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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
Sometimes, just describing other things they’re doing with their body language is helpful. For example, observing a conversation between my sisters that’s going on right now, I can see a lot of things they’re doing that don’t involve looking at one another:
- Blowing bubbles with gum
- Toying with the carpet
- Cupping their…
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
By the way, does anyone have any advice on writing things happening during a conversation? I need more things than ‘character1 looked at/glanced at/stared at/turned to/anything else involving looking at character2′.
Do they fidget or have any nervous habits?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
Hmm, I like it!
Let’s see. How about nothing to do with the characters. Mention what’s going on around them. Someone shouted something, pans clattered, wind picked up, a bird chirped, children giggled. Etc. That might help.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years ago
Okay, now I’m starting to believe that sign.
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freedom replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years ago
@theducktator LOLLLLLL the potato quote is from the LOTR movies XD
@everyone
These memes are too funny🤣🤣🤣🤣
@ellette-giselle @rae @keilah-h
I think he’d be a fan of regular chocolate chip, tbh
and Rae….
I’M TRYING TO NOT SPOIL THE 2ND BOOK AS MUCH AS I DID THE 1ST!!!! XP
plus, idk what I’d share…
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HighScribe replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years ago

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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years ago
I literally saw this on my way home from work. I could not restrain myself. Sorry Linus.

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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years ago
Yay! The tag worked!
I am curious what this hat looks like. Is this one of those flat hats, with a brim that goes over the eyes?
I’m not sure. This is what it looks like:

Is this the first time you have left Aaron’s perspective?
Yessssss………. but I was thinking about doing it in the next section and wanted to do it m…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years ago
Haha!!! I have No idea what you are talking about. It’s not like I’m driving and my dad says, “Turn left” so I hold up my hands just to make sure which way is left………………..
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Yay, meme!
Now we just need one for Character Castle
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Lol
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Sorry, there should have been more to that rp.
Nar
The man nodded.
Hugo began to pay for the items, but Nar stopped him. “You paid for the pastries. I will pay for this. No arguments! Besides, I traded in my currency for this place’s during lunch.”
As they stepped out of the street, Nar fiddled with her pen, finally discovering…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
What are the thoughts rushing through Hugo’s and the storekeeper’s heads rn? XD
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Nar
She shrugged. “I little I guess, but I don’t like them as much as Da. I’m more into nursing.”
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
While paper books do still exist, they can be very rare in my galaxy. Most books are either like e-books as we know them or high-tech books that the pages are immediately filled with whatever book you want. You still get the page-flipping expierance, but it’s not the exact same. Notebooks for Nar are basically like Word docs put inside a blank…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
This is very amusing rn
Nar
“Books are the things you read. Notebooks you write in. But I’ve never broken a notebooks spine before.” She shivered. “Do notebooks in this world feel?” She asked, horrified.
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Ruth replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years ago
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