Enid

@savannah_grace2009

Much better then the first one!!! I like it so much!!

I’m always rewriting my prologues too. Just something about beginnings ya know.

@whalekeeper

Awwww they’re so perfect in your art style <3

@savannah_grace2009

Oh no why was it sad?

@keilah-h

Awww thank you so much!!!!! that’s so sweet of you and it means a lot!

Anyone want to critique this??? I edited the prologue…AGAIN…bwahahaha

I feel too guilty to tag people (idk why…that’s just me) but I’m still going to tag some people…lol

@rae @jonas (not sure if you are still on here a lot but I’m ALIVE in case you were wonderingg!) @highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom (not sure if you’re still here…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Yesss I know I deserve it…lol

@godlyfantasy12

Yeah I know the feeling, I’ve had personal stuff going on tooo lol

I’ll be praying for you!

@whalekeeper

Awww girl I love you so much 😭😭😭💗💗💗 you always know what to say <3

@loopylin

HIII GIRL!!!! My thanksgiving was good, a little sad but good!

I think I ate too much food *cries*

@ellette-giselle

YES YES YESSSS!!!! I’m glad I’m back too lol

@liberty

If you guys want to introduce them/give more details, please go ahead!

Gladly!

Winston used to be person, but I won’t describe what his human form looked like. He was a ruthless Captain in the Evil King’s army (I’m writing a novelized fairy tale, so I have permission to name my villain the Evil King lol) and a sorceress came and cursed…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @theshadow

Tenz & Reid

Green vapor flooded into Reid’s eyes and over his body, his tendrils hovered near the people in the group, poised to grab them and whisk them away from danger. Another glowing form joined him, wearing an oversized coat. Tenz didn’t seem much like a child anymore. He pushed himself to the front of the group,…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Yep! They’re back!!!

Good, I’m glad Joseph feels human.

@linus-smallprint

Ah, makes sense about Andrew.

Don’t do it, Joseph. Look where growing depressed when comparing one’s self to others is getting Eric Humler!

Yeah, you tell him. (I find it so funny that our characters have similar traits and struggles. I was totally thinking of your Eric when I was editing this scene.)

I feel like you are mov…

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@whalekeeper

Happy thanksgiving to you!

Aw, so cute!

@whalekeeper

Aww, they’re so cute!! Happy Thanksgiving!

@ellette-giselle

Yay, Leon and Julian are back! 😁 Great section. It did kind of gloss everything and not show it personally, but that’s okay as long as your go back to more immediate-feeling scenes, if that makes sense. Joseph’s character is good. I’m glad he feels afraid and guilty for his fear. He feels human.

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @grcr

NEXT SECTION!!

Joseph returned to the Caddicks and committed himself to the work the Lord had called him to. Mr. Caddick, David, and Stephen were eager to dive into the training Noah and Darrien gave to the other young men seeking to lead in the church. Not…

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@linus-smallprint

No, not the same Andrew. (How did you remember him? I even forgot that was the other guy’s name. lol.) Should I change the name in the first book? That Andrew was an older teen, while this Andrew is like nine or ten.

Sometimes it is easy to forget what a blessing it is to have easy access to Bibles for everyone. I own 3 and can…

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@savannah_grace2009

we’ve already been talking, but so good to see you again!

@power

thx

@savannah_grace2009

Hi, good to see you! How was your thanksgiving?

@godlyfantasy12 YOU’RE ALIVE

We missed you!