Enid

@linus-smallprint

TNPT! I need to see if Charles will survive.🥺*hands him tea with honey*

@theducktator

I’ve looked into joining it before….Idk if you’ve seen this website or not but if not here you go:

https://theyoungwriter.com/crazy-writing-week

It explains a little bit more!!!!

I’m going to do it this year!!! Idk if its my impulsive adhd kicking in or what but yeahhhh hahahaha

anyone wanna try it for the first time with me??…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

I agree…it did get a little info dumpy lol

Again it isn’t edited…and the details about Andromeda are mostly in the prologue and will be revealed little by little in later chapters (if everything stays according to plan hahaha!)

@keilah-h

I know…me too…I feel like when I started it when she was little, it felt…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

lol

@keilah-h

lol

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon

So…where is Rory? I confused.

Leo

The pounding feet morphed into a gasping scuffle. Leo clenched his jaw, trying to sort out the sounds.

A muted voice. Mask lady? A door. A few footsteps. More sounds he didn’t want to identify. He grimaced.

A loud smack reverberated over the com unit, then m…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

*Moans*

Nooo, bring him back! What is he doing?!

@elishavet-pidyon @whalekeeper

Okay y’all, battle plan. Leo is going to be getting off at this next stop with Silvia and Quincy. Those two definitely have had all the violence/stress they can handle, so I’m sending them into the apartment (although Silvia is seriously…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

You just grabbed Rory?

In all this mess, no one has grabbed him yet. (no one that he doesn’t trust, that is)

This is not going to go well.

(btw, I couldn’t find a full physical description for Barns, but Rory is six-foot two, wiry, and incredibly strong.)

@elishavet-pidyon

COOL! Another soldier boy! He and Rory will like…[Read more]

@theducktator

I got it!

I live crazy writing week, lol.

I may do it tho.

@theducktator

Probably something like NaNoWriMo, but for only a week?

I got an email about something called Crazy Writing Week. It looks fun. Does anyone here know what that is?

@whalekeeper @highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009 @rae @linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle @esther-c

@hybridlore @grcr @help-I’m-out-of-tags

@linus-smallprint

And Charles survives another chapter! Yay!

@savannah_grace2009

Since I don’t know where you’re going with this, I can’t really provide a good opinion on whether you should keep it or not. It’s very different from any of your other drafts (which isn’t a bad thing!).

I would just say that if you’re going back to add more details about Andromeda, made sure you don’t get too info-dumpy,…[Read more]

Y’all. I’m listening to music while rolling cookies and I have found a song that’s pert near perfect for Leo (especially right now)

I just need U by Toby Mac

@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @grcr @ellette-giselle @theducktator

Thanks, y’all💜💜💜

And yes, the quote references Aadelheide…I didn’t kill anyone else that’s special to Leon, I promise. (errr…that doesn’t mean that no one dies in Book 3 tho🫠 so far at least 1 person dies in all 3 books, so uhhhh…yeahhhhh)

I am concerned about this “broken i…

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@elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @theducktator @liberty @ellette-giselle

*sits back and watches as the chaos and questions unfold*

And yes, Liberty, Hans hates Jews and is the main villain of my first novel (and other novels as well…he’s the main villain in several of my WW2 WIP ideas).

and yes, Elishavet, Hans’ entire life has been pretty…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper

Leo

And just like that, the lady was gone. Leo looked down at Quincy. Sighed. And retrieved the necklace from the five year old’s curious mouth.

“Play with it, don’t eat it. I thought you were past the ‘everything is edible’ stage.”

Quincy squinted at the shiny thing wrapped around his fingers.…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Go right ahead!

@ellette-giselle

Oh boy indeed.

Leo

He knew a second before Quincy landed in his lap that something was about to blow.

The kid was about to bolt. And he had no idea where he was going.

Leo should have kept hold on his arm.

Then Rory was rapidly vanishing down the lorry, leaving Leo with a five year old, his little sister in a bloodstained…[Read more]

@koshka

@whalekeeper

oh boy. Rory hates you both right now. lololol

Rory

Rory had jumped when Leo grabbed him, but then the boy let him go and began talking to the woman. He said she wasn’t an agent. Well of course she wasn’t. Rory could have seen that immediately. However, she was someone linked with government, and it looked like she was…[Read more]