Enid

@theducktator

AHHHHHH I knowwww!!!!

Aw yeah :/ she just needs a hug 🥺🥺🥺🥺

@keilah-h

my dad had a flamenco album I used to listen to a lot when I was little haha

Spanish music is the best! I don’t understand anything they’re singing though.

@linus-smallprint

Come ON.

*ushers my little sister in to do her cute face* please don’t kill Charles?

Being a writer, I know you’ll probably kill him.

@keilah-h

I’m curious about the Australia story.

And yes. Italian food is AMAZING. My family has recipes that have been passed down for generations.

@highscribeofaetherium

🤣🤣🤣

I thought this was pretty funny.

@linus-smallprint

lol. right!

@linus-smallprint

yes, it was, and then I had another Ezra and forgot about that Ezra and it became a mess.

This was a sad scene. Was Liam a Christian? It seemed like there hadn’t been a chance to even share the gospel with him.

not that I know of. Sadly that’s often the way life works. I feel like it gets redundant if all the characters get t…[Read more]

– Write about a character who’s lost.

– Write about a character struggling to learn a skill that in no way comes naturally to them.

– “Did I break your nose?”

– Two mortal enemies walk into a bar…

– A character breaks something important and rushes to fix it before anybody notices.

– Write a story about a character running into someone,…[Read more]

@liberty @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @esther-c @everyone-else

I signed up!!

@loopylin

Zeke?

@hybridlore

Thanks so much for the feedback!

Oh, I’ll take a look at those sections you mentioned. Thanks!

@ellette-giselle

I love it!! I was definitely surprised, that Amelia and Joseph wanted to adopt him so soon. We didn’t really get to see Sabina’s reaction.

I just caught two typos:

Without a word, Sabina gathered him up in her arms, and Ezra laid his head against her, his eyes closing. Sabina rocked him, humming softly.

I think this is meant to…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Thanks!

@whalekeeper

huh. interesting.

I might have to look into that.

Thanks!!

@whalekeeper

is there a free version?

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @grcr

NEXT SECTION

It was night, and Joseph sat in Liam’s bedroom keeping watch. Sabina sat at the bed, stroking the boy’s head. Joseph had told her about Beric’s acceptance of Christ, but not the full story. She was already worried, and he felt now was not the time…

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@liberty

I really like this picture!!! So good!

Congrats on the win!

I’m glad Power judged because I wouldn’t have been able to submit anything today. With Christmas right around the corner I’m swamped!

@whalekeeper

That is so cool!

*Goes to look it up.*

@theducktator

Thank you!

@mineralizedwritings

Thanks for the ideas! Also, the fact that Tauren shops like an old man is hilarious to me XD

@loopylin @whalekeeper @freed_and_redeemed,

Tauren spins around under the evening rays, filtering down through the canopy above. He laughs pushing his curls out of his eyes.

“Les..!” He shouts, breathless from running around. Lesli smiles as Tauren spins her around, her bare feet gliding over the grass. She laughs, but it feels for…[Read more]