Enid

@highscribeofaetherium

Okay good!!!!
Thank you so much!!!

Yes, Livia is a main character now!!!!

@liberty

Good, I’m glad!

@savannah_grace2009

I’m currently on chapter 9, and so far I think the pacing is good. I’ll get some more thoughts to you later.

Also, question. Are you planning on making Livia a main character in this draft?

Also I should warn you guys…

My book is a *little* dark. There’s mentions of abuse, slavery, and cruelty, as well as evil and violence.

It’s not graphic. I had my mom read  it and she said I wrote it “tactfully”, because it got the point across without being too graphic or descriptive.

But just thought I’d say that if you guys are really…[Read more]

@liberty and @everyone

Is there anything specific you want us looking for?

I’m not sure….

I’m just wanting to know if the plot makes sense at all, or if it’s all over the place.

In other drafts, I used to just throw the characters at you, but now I’m trying to establish them more distinctly.

So basically…I just want to know if all the…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Aw thank you so much girl <3 that means a lot!!!!!!!!!!!

And don’t worry about it!!!!! If you can, yeah, just let me know!

@keilah-h

As for the confusing aspect? Welp, if we’re talking the debacle with the Administrator, blame the original writers for any confusion, not me (trust me, I had to read through it like twice to write it properly, so you’re not the only one). The only places I’d be to blame are:

Oh, okay. The parts you added were actually my favorite and p…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I might be able to read it, but I’ll try to get back to you if/when I start.

Don’t let yourself think that you or your writing isn’t valuable, even if no one is reading it at the moment. You’re an amazing writer, and if God wants you to use that talent right now, He’ll help you to write what he wants you to.

“You didn’t even make ambulance noises!”-me

“Slothy doesn’t like going to the doctor because last time she had her back pulled out and stuffed full of donuts.”-my cousin

@whalekeeper

Lolllll

@keilah-h

Okay!!!

Sounds good!!!!!!

@whalekeeper

I actually love that Liv is younger but thought to herself that Aubrielle needs the resources more. It’s only a little contrast (to the ‘save the resources for the youngest’ trope) but does a lot to show her personality.

Aww thanks!!! That means a lot <3

Yeah Liv’s pretty sweet!!!! I love her so muchhhh

@keilah-h

Yes I’d read it!!!!!!!

@keilah-h

Wow you do read fast!!!!!!!!!!

XDXD

What did you think???

@theducktator

Sounds good!

@whalekeeper

Aughhh! Now it’s glitter pudding! *licks some off the spoon* Oh wait… tastes like strawberry!

@whalekeeper

Ahh… okay then, I’ll accept it. ☺️

@liberty

Yeah. I probably would not know a lot about the Holocaust if I didn’t love to read–I feel like most of my knowledge about it has come from historical fiction. It makes sense that other people who don’t read wouldn’t know a ton about it.

@whalekeeper

You’re welcome!

Glitter in our tea?! Bleh! 😝

@savannah_grace2009

I’m interested! I probably won’t have time until after CWW though.

@esther-c

Do you really want to know?