Enid

@linus-smallprint

From what I know of your second book, Kalmar does seem kind of accurate. If he has a redemption arc, I would compare him to Edmund Pevensie.

A possible option for them is to say they prefer worshipping in private, then they’ll obviously worship God and not the idols. But that is pretty close to a lie already and I don’t see that working more than once or twice. Probably the best thing for them to do is to just tell them.

@ellette-giselle

I think it’s fine. They have to, in this instance, instead of just jumping at it when they don’t need to. Since Elishavet was the one who pointed that out, I would wait to see what she thinks, but I think that it’s fine.

@the_lost-journal

How do you say Ahava? Uh-hah-vah? I like it (well, I guess I shouldn’t say that when I don’t know how it’s actually pronounced, but it looks like it would sound pretty 😅). If you like it and can’t think of any particular reasons not to keep it, I’d say go with it.

As for Thomas… hmm… is there a certain style/ethnicity of…[Read more]

@hybridlore   K.

QUESTION FOR THOSE WHO HAVE READ ALL POSTED SECTIONS.

So, as we all know, and @elishavet-pidyon pointed out….. Julian took that first encounter full-tilt and without a necessary dose of wise caution. However….. now I’m a little stuck.

Julian and Leon are living in the house of a family who worship’s idols. Due to their c…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I was wondering why you never said anything even tho you were active yesterday. XD

@ellette-giselle

Yes?

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

I have a question for anyone who’s read the section I posted yesterday.

Sobbing cause I’m stuck.

I’d much rather work on something else.

ugh.

After some comments y’all made I wonder if I’m about to take this curve too fast…… but it’s already a SUPER long book and I haven’t even started……….

ugh.

@the_lost-journal

Now you have to change your pfp to “dead potato” which I would assume would be a plate of frenchfries.

lolololol.

also, I LOVE the quote at the bottom and the fact that you said it was “not shakespear” just about killed me. XD XD

@linus-smallprint

lol. That’s a good one.

@linus-smallprint

I can’t believe you ended the paragraph with Rutabaga!

Every time he does that I die laughing.

@koshka

those are perfect!!!

@rae

Oh, your bear one is great….. but i prefer this method.

@rae

skylight one is awesome btw.

@rae    @keilah-h

No, writer problem eighteen is totally mine when my search history includes how to hide a pregnancy, computer hacking techniques, does getting your throat slit kill you instantly? how long can you really survive without food or water before you can’t function, how long would it take a person to freeze to death, best places to…[Read more]

@theshadow

Emery, Colin, Jehan, Girard, Philippe, Lorin, Perrin, Nicolas, Richart and Olivier are French.

Some German ones are Alexander, Konrad, Hermann, Heinrich, Emmerich, Berthold, and Christian.

@keilah-h    @linus-smallprint

gaspeth!!!

The insult!

The island was named AFTER Alcatraz in order to tarnish his name.

XD XD

@freed_and_redeemed

OH MY GOODNESS!!! Those are amazing!!!!!

I can’t wait!!!! I like the slave the best. (forgot his name)

And the prince!!!!

@the_lost-journal

Check one page back. Freedom just posted Character Boards

@savannah_grace2009

Hey girl, sorry I haven’t really read more of your WIP yet.  I’ve been pretty busy (which is why I kind of vanished for a few days). I’ll try to read some more and get you some feedback sometime this week.