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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Is it bad that it was reversed?
I’m not convinced by Julian telling Dian the gospel in that moment
Ugh.
I had that feeling as I was editing it.
Hmm…. I might possibly chuck that section altogether………..
So is it bad that Julian responded differently?
Well….. I think that might be because that tends to be w…[Read more]
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Andrew posted an update 1 year, 6 months ago
@whalekeeper would you like to join the cause of the squirrels?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
That’s insane, but yeah, at least the class all knew it was wrong. Thanks for the inspiration!
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hybridlore replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Yeah, it’s rough, I feel you. Exactly, it’s just that sometimes the things that feel so big to us don’t matter so much to other people, or they’re too hard to explain.
Okay, sounds good! Hopefully someday we can plan one you’ll be able to make. 😊
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @liberty
NEXT SECTION
Leon woke in the darkness. He heard Rolf breathing and felt the rocking of the ship below him. He sat up, wondering where they were going and what fate lay ahead. Leon leaned against the side of the ship’s hold and drew his knees to his chest,…
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Stepheroni and Cheese changed their profile picture 1 year, 6 months ago
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
The drawings are great! Especially love the one with Alan and Martha
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
I think so! Send it!
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
Wyoh keeps eating whatever I have to say…*copies this post*
Anyways, I’m interviewing you for Potato News 64 so check that out XD
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@theducktator messed up your tag ^^^^^ sorry
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@ducktator forgot your tag, sorry ^^^^
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Aw, I’m sorry to hear that, I’ll be praying for you.
Mateo
“My name is Mateo, and I’m honored by you, little fellow, that when you first saw me, you were not scared. I vowed to be friends with the person like you.” Mateo took a great bow, but still holding up the kid in his other hand. “Consider me your friend.” He looked at the…[Read more]
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
@whaley
Those are hilarious–
Are we sure that superhero has good intintions?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Yeah I know. At first I could never see it fitting, but the more I listened to it the more I kept thinking about these guys, (specifically Leon for some reason) so now it has to be the book theme song, because I think about them every time. 😂
Ah, I get it.
We didn’t do Aladdin because of the clothing the girls are wearing. I have…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint      @liberty
Look y’all, whatever you may think…. this is actually the truth.

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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @liberty
For all those it may concern…. I would call this the theme song if this book.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 6 months ago
Probably for doing dirty work. *shrug* basically completing tasks that the main villain doesn’t want to (or can’t)
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
@hybridlore    @linus-smallprint
Hey, that kind of stuff even happens here in America.
I took a class out of the home with several home school kids. It was a Constitutional class, and at one point we were debating real court cases or arguing pro or con real things.
Well, I was put on a team with three of the guys, (that class was heavily out…[Read more]
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