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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic Potato news 64 in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
*calls the news station*
Oh, hi, I’m Stephie! I’m so passionate about protecting potatoes. You know, I’m an expert in therapeutics and in neuropsychology. My specific area of interest is in psychopaths. I’m currently writing a book about how they work, and I’ve been interviewing the most dangerous criminals in order to compile…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 6 months ago
YAY!!!!!
Oh man!! That really got to me!!!
I am someone who loves large chunks of scripture in stories, but if it feels too long maybe break it up a little and have shorter passages with some “…” filling the sections that don’t directly pertain to the story.
YES! It felt very legit!
One of my favorite!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Well, I’ve never seen that movie. Just heard of it. And I like the song “Speechless” but other than that I know nothing of it besides it taking place in Arabia. lololol.
But that IS how I feel!!!!
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Ruth replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 6 months ago
@raxforge @ellette-giselle @hybridlore @keilah-h @whalekeeper @theducktator
It feels like forever since I posted a story on here, but here is story #11! This is my favorite one of the entire Baron Chronicles, and it brought tears to my eyes. I hope you enjoy it too:)
Though your sins be as Scarlet…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Long story. If you read back, it’s just on the last page or two. She tried to steal my character Alec to stop me from taking hers, but then I said Alec was too far away for her to take him, so we agreed that it was a misunderstanding and she’d kidnapped some random bystander.
That’s funny. I like Leon better 😝
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Wow. Aladdin vibes.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @liberty
For anyone who is interested…..
Hassan (center) and two of the other slave traders.
(and yes, they are in their native country in this picture)

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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Hello, nice to see you around.
Girls are weird.
*indignant gasp* how dare you!
😂
For some reason I started to imagine Hassan as Middle Eastern when you mentioned his name. Probably wearing a turban of sorts.
Well that is exactly how you should picture him! Bravo! 👏🏻
(if you look back at the story moodboard you may catch a…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 6 months ago
No idea who those fellas are you just mentioned, but go for it! As long as they aren’t stupid. They can be funny and even idiots, but they need to have a clear roll. A reason for why their leader hasn’t killed them off.
Have you seen The Defense of New Haven?
If not, you must watch it! It’s really good. It’s a Christian home…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Wowwww that is a humungous post 👀
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Don’t worry, I added it!!
Thanks so much girl!!
Thank you! I really appreciate it!!
@youthreegirls @keilah-h @grcr @smiley
Sorry for dropping off the face of the earth there for a little bit! I was still editing I just forgot to post, lol! So here’s a chapter dump for y’all!! (I apologize if I’…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
*huffs, sits down to wait patiently for next section* Fine then.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
I knowwww
I remember when Fire Face burned down the castle and just added so much more chaos hahaha
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Hmm. I guess we’ll have to see.
Fine then!!
*pulls out dagger, grabs Alec, and holds blade to his throat.* BACK OFF!!
yeah, we’ll have to see what happens.
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hybridlore replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@whalekeeper ^^
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hybridlore replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@loopylin @grcr @theducktator @esther-c whalekeeper @highscribeofaetherium @stephie @theshadow @ellette-giselle @savannah_grace2009
Just sending out a reminder that tomorrow is the group call! 11 AM Eastern, 10 Central, 9 Mountain, and 8 Pacific time. Make sure either Ellette or I have your email!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
So now you stole a gun from me?
Well, it’s my world, so it’s my gun. And since I’m its author, I say it’s out of bullets. 😝
*makes another attempt to steal Leon and Rolf from you*
Okay. I feel like that wasn’t really clear . . . but then again, we did get a warning that the next town would be dark, so I guess that was it. I…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Um, I’m threatening Alec and his world totally has guns.
So, no one would look twice at a dirty slave even when slavery has just been abolished?
IN ONE TOWN!
The so they shut down the main market that reached the inland. This would still be going on in coastal towns, but that town reached a bigger part of the Empire and also had a…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
So, no one would look twice at a dirty slave even when slavery has just been abolished?
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