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@ellette-giselle

Yeahh xD If I had stopped to think about it, I probably would have expected something to happen with it.

Oh yeah. Thanks for the reminder. XD

@hybridlore

lolololol.

The whole not wanting it to happen so not seeing the signs.

btw, it’s Tuesday! Where’s your chapters?!

@ellette-giselle

Oh, that.

I didn’t see it coming, but I should have. 😂

@hybridlore

No, I meant because I made it clear that the ice was dangerous.

@ellette-giselle

I do remember Julian talking to Ernst about his father, if that’s what you’re talking about. Nice to get a glimpse into his state of mind before… well…

@linus-smallprint

aha. That makes sense….
And it works. Joseph’s main struggle is dread, and so that book played more off of the dread factor. I wanted you to feel his hopelessness.

This is different, so it’s good that it came across different.

Also, I believe you were the one who mentioned Phillip’s section seeming a little out of place.…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I have to say, this was probably one of the most exciting sections I’ve ever read in this series.

Wow. This has always been a favorite section of mine but, i must know, why did you say that? What makes this one stand out so much?

Not Roland? I know he just got married, but that man loves hunting, and its not like he’s goi…

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@hybridlore

Thank you!

I know!!!! POOR ROLF!

Did you see it coming with the foreshadowing earlier that day?

@ellette-giselle

Oh no. 😭 Poor Rolf.

I really liked this section… even though it was sad. You did a good job with the action and tying in Lieutenant Roth’s story to the main plot.

@freed_and_redeemed  @hybridlore    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty   @linus-smallprint

NEXT SECTION!

“We need more meat,” Rolf said. He and several others were sitting about in the main cavern, eating breakfast.

“Are we running low again?” Julian asked.

“Yes, and we’ve hunted this area clean.”

“Then let’s pla…

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Nice to see I won’t be alone 🙂

@dekreel

Thx.

The backstory behind it is pretty crazy.

@whalekeeper @liberty

I hesitate because I reeeaaallllyy need to get back into writing/editing. But… that week is leading up to my brother’s graduation and I’m in the homestretch for my schoolwork and life has just been busy and I need time to just chill. Anyway… I also really really want to sign up for CEW still…. 😭 I am just being indecisiv…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Congratulations!!!!!

@koshka

*Is promptly buried and drowns in the confetti*

ugh. Now I’ll have sparkles in my coffin.

@liberty

Yeah, I love it a lot.

Oh go right ahead!!!

Yep, he’s one of my favorites. He’s such a great character.

freed_and_redeemed

Oh my word! Homer’s writings, (and a lot of the Greek writings) have inspired a lot of things in my books!

One of my favorite author’s once said,

“Stealing ideas from contemporaries is rude and tasteless. Stealing from the long dead is considered literary and admirable. The same is true of grave-robbing. Loot your local…[Read more]

@grcr

(quick note before we begin… your character has some interesting ways of talking.)

“As a matter of fact, I do! I have three siblings—Frin, Lily, and Iniko—aka my fellow quadruplets. I have a mommy and a dad, a grandma and a grandpa. Two uncles, an auntie, and at least nine or ten cousins. Hello hello.”

“Friends tho? Bruh, I have too…

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@rae

Maybe next year. I don’t really have anything ready to edit right now.