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hybridlore replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
To be honest I loved them together. Autumn is so sweet and godly and her and Easton’s relationship was so … sweet. (For lack of a better word. 😂) I loved how he was willing to see past her disabilities and treat her like a princess—wheel her chair around, dance for her, carry her on his back, etc. And she was such a wise voice and encou…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
And @hybridlore
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @grcr
Thoughts on Easton and Autumn as a couple and how their personalities go together? I’m doing some character work rn and I’m wondering if those two actually are a good match… like if they would make a good married couple in the future….
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Character questions in the forum Characters 1 year, 1 month ago
I need to think about the fear responses.
How long would your character survive the zombie apocalypse?
I’m tempted to say they’d all be fine since they don’t seem to have much in the way of brains…XD
Ryla would try to feed them baked goods instead of brains and would die.
Ardon would probably die trying to protect Ryla, but if he…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Well, that was fast!!! I am so glad that you liked it!!! Woah! Favorites list!??! That’s saying something when I know the kind of things you read!!
Well thanks so much for skimming it! I’ll take a look at the comments. May email you a few things after I do! Yes, I have a playlist. I’ll email that too.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Honestly! You two need this published!
The funniest thing is, you are writing a LotR fanfic but in a way that no one would actually say, “Oh, it’s fanfic!” It’s a complete twist of the rules! Quite brilliant really.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
also, if you would let me know on KP how far you get each day that would be great so I can look over the comments. Word doesn’t tell me what comments are new and it will save me having to weed through them all. XD
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Character questions in the forum Characters 1 year, 1 month ago
Reading everyone’s answers to this question is really fun. I should post answers for my own characters sometime soon.
But, in the meantime, a second question: How long would your character survive the zombie apocalypse?
(The first question is still open for answers, of course)
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Loopy replied to the topic Character questions in the forum Characters 1 year, 1 month ago
Their story is inspired by Chinese fantasy… so… ancient China… mixed with elements of, like, Japan and Korea… and my own crazy fascinations.
That sounds really cool!
I just finished reading a Brandon Sanderson book that was partially based off of Japan and ancient Korea and I really liked that style of world building.
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Loopy replied to the topic Think Twice About Character Death! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@elishavet-pidyon I posted a response in my profile because this topic was glitching out really bad earlier
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@esther-c Characters still attend class and do normal stuff when their authors aren’t writing for them. They just fade into the background, not freeze in place, lol. Unless you want to write that they were doing something else that whole time.
If you want, I can give you a summary of recent events if you do want to jump back in
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
I might RP my characters soon, idk. I think they have pretty bad attendance at this point, lol XD
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Loopy posted an update 1 year, 1 month ago
@elishavet-pidyon ok so the character death topic refuses to load for me rn so I hope you see this here.
I really loved reading the short story! I’m now really curious about these characters and I want to know their backstories and what happens next. Is it from something you’re working on currently?
As for the challenge, I didn’t cry, but it…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Awesome, thanks. btw, KP is acting up for me so I can’t see anything I’m typing. (Thought I’d let you know in case my posts are complete gibberish. lol)
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Hey, if you have the time to do so, I’d really like it if you would let me know how many chapters you cover each day when you read S%TH. It doesn’t actually tell me if you’ve commented, but if you tell me what chapter’s you’ve read, I’ll know where to look for comments from you. Thanks!
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Great KP Search in the forum Questions and Support 1 year, 1 month ago
Does anyone here have Facebook? We could try contacting them that way. I think KP has an Instagram too.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@esther-c @keilah-h I bet we can get there before 2026. We just have maybe twoish more class periods and lunch before the dance.
@everyone would people be ok with making classes end early today to give the students time to get ready and to make the dance come quicker? I’m thinking one more class period, lunch, and then one last class.
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Esther replied to the topic The Great KP Search in the forum Questions and Support 1 year, 1 month ago
Honestly, Slack would be a good option, I’ve used it for other writing groups and it works super well. The only problem is that the free version keeps messages for only 90 days, which could become an issue…
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Esther replied to the topic Character questions in the forum Characters 1 year, 1 month ago
Ooh interesting first question! Let’s see here… For my current WIP…
Audrey’s primary response is definitely freeze. She just needs to stop, take in the situation, and figure out what to do, although her fears and anxieties often drown out the voice of logic to begin with. And then her secondary response is flight. If she can’t control or figure…[Read more]
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Well, I am seeing it now. ;p
Yay, I’m glad you liked them. They’re both part of the serial story Koshka and I are writing. The snippet you got will be part of the appendix section about Onnendel.
I’m glad it was an emotional piece, but not too dramatic. 🙂 I am so happy it made you sad. (Weird thing to say, but true, lol.)
AWESOME! ok. XD What…[Read more]
@loopylin I don’t mean to bug you, I’m just curious, and I know sometimes I need to be nudged a little. Have you drawn any of this yet? I can send a different character description if this one is not working.
Anyway. Just excited to see what you do. =D
@elishavet-pidyon I completely forgot lol. Thanks for the reminder! I’ve be so disoriented lately, I got up this morning and started getting ready for church. On a Monday. 🤦♀️
Anyways, I’ll start drawing Victor tonight :]