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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
@ellette-giselle I’m sorry I forgot to respond to this. I had like ten emails from KP in my inbox, so I just forgot. XD. I liked it a lot though.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @rae
How did the snowball fight topic turn into a horrible backstories competition? 🤪
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Ruth replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
plus another who was kidnapped and experimented on and trained as a little child
which mentally messed him up enough that he acts like a little kid
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Ruth replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
meanwhile I have a charrie who watched his family die, his home destroyed and his clan wiped out
another who never knew what it was to be a kid, who killed people from an early age
and another who was created in a lab with mental links to his brothers who were all killed, brothers he watched being created and even named…plus his father is the…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago
Here’s Sara’s (the main character, Cole’s twin sister.)

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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Thanks!
Those books are very dark.
I mean, that was just Joe.
Then we get Jack who tried to rebel from the inside and had to watch his whole team, including his cousin, get shot.
And Jonathan and Micheal………
And Nathan……
yeah.
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@anybody
I created a mock cover my Christmas short story! I’m not 100% in love with the title, so it might change. Once I have some alpha readers give me their feedback, I’mma share it on here for y’all to read! But before then, here’s the cover to intrigue you. 😋

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hybridlore replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago
@whalekeeper Thank you!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago
@grcr @esther-c @ellette-giselle
Thanks so much!! 🤩 I think Everett’s is my favorite. I really like the colors and pictures in his lol.
@ellette
Okay, so for the book I’m working on right now, he’s sort of indecisive. Sara *slight spoilers* becomes a Christian and starts attending the underground church meetings with Everett and Jess, but Cole…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Alpha need a lot of perspective reorientation. Actually I have a close friend who once reacted to a puppy in a very similar way, haha 😝 He even used the word scrawny.
Lol
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I don’t know what’s worse!! Watching people you love brutally murdered for the pleasure of a bloodthirsty crowd, or being completely abused and brainwashed. Or…. yeah, there’s a lot.
I guess I’ll go with the second.
Joe was ripped away from his family by the government when he was 12 years old. He was marked for government…[Read more]
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Esther posted an update 1 year, 9 months ago
@hybridlore
I added my second draft of the short story to the document! I’m mainly looking for feedback on character, plot, pacing, and prose. Especially parts that seem preachy, repetitive, or seem like I’m info-dumping. I’m open to any feedback and thoughts you have on it, feel free to tear into it and be nit-picky! XD If you catch a gramm…[Read more] -
Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Whaoh! Don’t be a Scrooge!!
Please say you really do like Christmas.
Otherwise you might have a frightening night in the near future.
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calyhuge replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I don’t discriminate – I will not rest until every man who goes about with “Merry Christmas” on his lips will be boiled in his own pudding and buried with a stake of holly through his heart, and if you don’t get that reference, you’re on the naughty list
I will bide my time until full armageddon can be achieved
Hit me, I dare…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I’m glad you like him. I’ve tried hard to make him an interesting charrie.
Yeah, I get that. It makes sense. Baron was a solo, sometimes duo for the Bloodsilver, so large teams aren’t his usual thing.
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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago
I love themmm!! 😍
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Oh my goodness. That’s adorable.
snowball x10
*gasp* how could you!
@liberty (because you’ll probably want to read this. 😉 )
“How’s my favorite patent today?”
Liam looked up as Werner peeked around the door. “Doing well,” he replied, a smile touching his pale face.
Werner stepped in and softly closed the door behind him. “I’m glad…
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Don’t worry, he will die a well deserved horrible death.
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Ruth replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@ellette-giselle snowball x10
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Okay, thank you so much!! I am so sorry I completely forgot about it after KDWC shut down 🤦. I will try to check it out later today!
No worries at all! I only added the draft into the doc today, so you aren’t really forgetting about anything. 😝