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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
*screams* he’s back!
I just meant the look on his face. lol.
Oh cool! I will be saving that one into my collection!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
oh my goodness, you’re hilarious!
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Those are awesome! Especially the Eric one!😂
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
I’ll send them as soon as I draw them. I’m finishing up illustrations for LTBL, so it may be a little bit.
On the fence is just where I wanted you as a reader!!
Will do! I’ll remind ya!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
btw, did you think I was gonna kill them?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
I’m so glad you liked it! Yes, one was a Stephen ending and one was a Daniel! lol.
I loved the descriptions of the different soldiers’ uniforms and stuff for some reason
Oh so do I! Honestly, I was thinking, “Keilah is going to like this,” as I was writing the descriptions! lol
This is gonna sound like a weird ask, but if you e…
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 8 months ago
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
I was up till 2:00 last night. And…1:00 most other nights.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
No, not harsh at all! This is perfect!
Not sure how many illustrations yet. I think I have 20 for the last one.
Your guess has been noted, but no answers will be given.
Thank you so much!
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
I hung out with my cousins playing mario kart and watching movies all night. It was fun.
Any of you guys have unique family traditions for the new year? :]
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Lol that’s cute. I was up till 2:30.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Oh no!!! That’s terrible!!! That makes me want to cry for you!
I know. I was so mad.
Hmm, I find it funny that you think the ending thing feels a little un-realistic. I wrote it after reading of five different situations in different countries where something like this happened to Believers who had been arrested. XD
I guess the B…
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Who’s turn is it to RP?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
THEOLOGY/MESSAGE
~ Any theological concerns for the story?
I don’t think so.
~ What would you say my world view was?
Christian? XD. (Again, I don’t really know what kind of answer you want here.)
~ What would you say was the message of the story?
God will give us strength when we are weak and help us have the courage to stand up for Him.
~Were…
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
I found it intriguing. Please tag me if you post more. 🙂
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Wow! This is soooo helpful!
Hmm, I find it funny that you think the ending thing feels a little un-realistic. I wrote it after reading of five different situations in different countries where something like this happened to Believers who had been arrested. XD
I guess the Bible is correct when it says God moves in mysterious…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
STORYLINE
~ Was the plot solid and engaging?
~ Did the pacing feel consistent throughout the book? If not, where did it lag or feel dull?
I feel like these two kind of go together. The pacing, I felt, was not very consistent. Sometimes we would be skipping over weeks or months, sometimes we would get slow, slice-of-life scenes, and sometimes we…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
I have a question
I started writing this short story, but before I continue, I’d like to know if it’s interesting.
No title yet
Also, sorry that it’s a little rough
When I was a child I loved to read books. Any moment I had to myself I would crack open a book, squeeze into a tiny but comfy corner and read. I would discover lost worlds, travel…
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