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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Well, thank you for venturing into new grounds! This does help freshen up this story from the others.
Thanks! That’s the goal!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
linus-smallprint
All four gospels and Acts in one night? Wow. These guys love to read.
First off, that’s not THAT MUCH.
secondly, they started in the morning and went on through the night to the next morning.
thirdly, yes, they love to study.
Why do I have a feeling someone from Leon and Julian’s group is going to end up in these g…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
lol, I think I’m going to keep him on the main floor to try creep out as many people as possible 😁
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
…Where is Rory?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Oh. My. Goodness.
Keep that creep away from my Rory or I swear the kid’s gonna die of fright! 😂😂😂
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @liberty
NEXT SECTION!!!
The day passed, and the five young men explored the town. Everyone seemed to be very busy, and no one was interested in talking with them. So, the five decided to scout out the town and see what it was like. As Roland had said, the town wa…
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
New charrie!!!
Mateo
Tall and cover in black, the figure wore a black sombrero type hat and ominously played a white guitar. His melody could send chills up the bravest of heart. He hung his head low, making it so that no one could see his face. He walked into the school grounds, the essence of evil hanging around him.
Who wants to talk…[Read more]
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Rax and Ben
Rax didn’t like Syph’s answer and wanted to make amends, “I didn’t mean to hurt your feelings, I just thought you were confused, so I thought it would be best if you just came and watched. I’m sorry if I hurt you.”
@ellette-giselle I know, Rax is weird
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
lol.
I was told the writing style wasn’t great either.
Have you read the original Rapunzel? Like, the 100 page narrative? Old, old, old.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 6 months ago
Just emailed you about this!!!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
WOW!!!! I LOVE IT!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
@the_lost-journal @keilah-h  @theducktator
Never read the HTYD books because someone told me not to and just stick with the movies.
Never read Princess Bride but I really want to!
There are two movies that were better than the book that I can think of off the top of my head……. but I forgot the second. XD
The bi…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Wait… you posted in the spring channel here, I think. Are you joining KDWC?
Lolol! Yeah, senior year is kind of crazy.
Normally everyone’s trying to kill each other with jokes.
🤣🤪
Oh wow. I’ve never really thought about that before, but it must be really weird and interesting. What’s the coolest thing you’ve learned so far?
Yea…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Great! Yeah, I thought it was a really cool way to detail the narrative and make Sara’s voice distinct. I’m glad it doesn’t feel too distracting.Â
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
First off, @whalekeeper had an amazing suggestion for Cole and Sara! Love that!
Second, I like the synesthesia. It’s interesting and I don’t really know much about it so I feel like i’m uncovering something new as I read. I may be the odd number on this, but I personally enjoy it.
how about you, @linus-smallprint ?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
You’re good! XD
Oh, this is unrelated, but by the way, how is Challenge 4 going? What are you planning to do for your senior thesis? (I saw you were sprinting to work on it.)
I think I understand what you were trying to say, and I love that idea! A scene is starting to form in my head already 😅 The only problem is, I’ll have to…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
*Splutter of laughter*
Fish person? How is Syph like a fish person, pray tell?
Syph
So he didn’t have to “get a girl”, whatever that meant. He turned to give Ellie a grateful smile before shifting narrowed eyes to the Rax Boy.
What was that supposed to mean? A good natured challenge, or a patronizing ‘let the Little…[Read more]
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