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@rae

It’s painful to read, but thanks I guess.

It’s not painful to read. You describe things clearly, there are varied sentence lengths, and you suggest emotion at sprinkled points through the sections. You also don’t harp on descriptions, which is something I struggle with.

@rae

Aw man… If it’s any consolation to you, I enjoy reading your rps! You’re doing a great job and if you’re frustrated with something, whatever it is, usually that means you’re getting better.

Lucille

Lucy tumbled over the crow’s back and landed on the ground. The crow’s focus shifted and it instantly chose to stride toward her.

There w…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

It’s beautiful to hear how you’ve found joy, Sara. I’m thankful you’ve found peace in this.

Jesus has really felt everything your family is going through. It’s not just that he understands it, he went through it – he cried and suffered and wished for the pain to disappear.

And now, in heaven, Jesus knows the best remedy to…[Read more]

@rae

I apologize for any mistakes, and also for taking so long.

I’m tired.

No problem at all. You mustn’t apologize, dear Miss Cranberry Sauce! I do not expect you to reply right away.

@rae

Lucille

Lucy lay curled up. She pressed her face into the jacket and the fabric on her skin eased her tight breaths. Time faded; maybe an hour passed, but it didn’t matter. Enough time passed for her senses to fade, replaced by the feeling of her mother next to her on the couch. An arm wrapped around her shoulders so she could hide in the m…[Read more]

*Begins brainstorming a way out of the challenge I created*

@loopylin

<3 I feel like that line is semi relatable. I know I’d talk to myself about myself if I knew I was dying.

Seems like Lucy might need some help

Either that or she figures out a way down

@rae

I’m probably the cause of your brain’s suffering. I wrote a lot. XD Gabriel will be of most help if he defends her after she gets down. I’m sure…[Read more]

@rae

All good, I’ve done worse to him…

Such is the life of a charrie

Lucille

Most children wonder at some point in their life – what is it like to be eaten? How much does it hurt? Does it take very long?

Lucy hung from the crow, feet dangling, and spoke quietly to herself. “S’pose the Lord knew it was… yeah, it was good to be me. I liked bei…[Read more]

@grcr @loopylin @mineralizedwritings

Loving all of this!! Everyone has gotten better and more confident with their art in the past… three years? I don’t actually remember how long it’s been lol, but it’s really cool to see.

@loopylin @elishavet-pidyon and maybe @theducktator

Marcel

“And Marcel! You’re team captain two.”

Marcel stood in a corner, only half focused as he practiced spinning pencils in both hands. He looked up, suddenly aware of everyone looking at him. Some of the guys around him laughed and pushed him forward by the shoulders.

“How does that so…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Yessss, the cringe 😭 It’s such a genuine mixture of appreciation for your past self but also disgust. I can’t believe I wrote some of the things on here.

like I would check KP at least 10 times every day 😭😂

Same. Normally I don’t much. But I’m on break now and I decided to spend my time writing, so guess what? 😂 I’m back to c…[Read more]

@rae

Gabriel has ornithophobia now. I’m making this so hard for him

Lucille

The crow dodged sharply to the side and Lucy yelped. A rock flew through the air and missed the crow’s head by inches. The Protector was already running after them and aiming another rock. The crows cackled in response.

Lucy desperately kicked her legs. She could unb…[Read more]

I love giant crows

@rae

Lucille

Lucy watched as the Protector was preoccupied with using his mask. “Yeah. If -”

A deep-throated shriek cut her off. A great rustling exploded on the other side of the wall and Lucy’s stable footing did not help as a black feathery mass pushed her off and into the air.

She couldn’t hear her own voice over the bird cries. A swarthy…[Read more]

@rae

Lucille

It had been less than an hour. After a few moments, she stirred. “I saw a bit.”

She got up and, without waiting for him to ask for more, went to the same wall from before. She climbed it again, much slower. The wind blew into her face as her head rose over the top, stinging her eyes and fluffing her short, downy hair.

This time…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

3 months isn’t too much compared with the breaks some people take. (Not that it’s wrong for them to be away so long; life is life.) We all have important things irl!

I believe you put new chapters in your project for some of that time, so you were still contributing in spirit. XD

Waking up and coming back to this, I think she’s never left home before so she’s a tad shell shocked