Enid

@loopylin

Splendid *offers Dante a butterscotch scone in thanks*

Sebzter

“After a precursory kick of inappropriate nature, I made a face.” Seb yanked at his lower eyelids, and his squishy smile widened in the overwhelming white light emitting from his eyes. The rhythm was strong, and he held it back in order to talk sensibly. “Now they want…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

*Waves* 😝 Heya. You probably already know how you want the characters to end up, but I’d also recommend plotting out what to do in the middle, or at least have bullet points for each chapter.

Having some kind of outline helps the pacing a lot, which I can see you’re worried about rushing or slowing. Leon’s alcoholism and R…[Read more]

@loopylin

She’s so cuuuute XD Hey, and she has my hair style too!

@loopylin

*Snorts* Just imagining someone with a pet goat around the house –

@rae You got that right @loopylin

Sebzter

The best part about the whole thing was how, in utter confusion in the darkness, those in the halls joined the bullies in a tidal wave of people. They had no idea what the rush was about, but followed quickly.

The leaders, however, were perfectly aware of what was happening, insomuch as revenge was…[Read more]

@rae

Okay 😂 Um, I took the prompt “fairy tale” and went for exactly what Winston would picture as a fairy tale.

Winston

When Winston woke, he found real life to be all the more unrealistic.

The young demon-born rolled onto his back, and rubbed grass clippings out of his hair. Around him green hills rustled in the breeze, and a blinding blu…[Read more]

Help… please… *gasps for breath* I have been in their clutches for so long… *death rattle*

Holy cow, Wyoh had me in a vice-like grip for a couple days…

anyway.

@keilah-h

All I can say is, it’s coming along 🙂

@rae

Do you want to roleplay first, or can anyone start?

YEEESSS, I ESCAPED

…Wyoh? *check check*

@keilah-h

Aw, thanks! He’s very new, not even a week old XD I think he is scaly all over, but other than the color, they are not immediately distinguishable from skin because they are smooth and small. But the scales are rough and textured if they are closer to the horns and back of the head.

@rae

Oki, coooooooool

@rae

Lol, you’re good 😂

Yes, he does have issues with his personality. Because of the way his brain develops when he’s younger, he has a lot of mood swings.

When I asked if you have issues with his personality, I meant, is his personality not functioning well for you as a writer? Like, from an outside perspective, a character’s personality can b…[Read more]

I’ll join! I have a super new character with mythological roots even, so that’s perfect 🙂

Name: Winston

Species: Half-demon. (By ‘demon’ I am not basing this creature on a biblical force, but on the forces in mythology. They represent manipulation of balance, rather than pure evil. Think of Journey to the West.)

Age: 16

Appearance: Winston…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

You’re still oooonnnn *applause*

1. I think it’s understandable, especially in a small space when you’re about to be discovered.

2. They are a little sympathetic, but not a whole lot, since they took unnecessary pleasure in punishing him.

3. It’s short, makes sense, certainly something to expect. I can’t say I have any…[Read more]

@rae

*Pulls out clipboard* Okay, okay, checks out…

His arc is as uneven as the waves in a storm.

Do you think the issue is his personality? Because from what you’ve said, his personality is uneven/confusing for you. Being created in a lab might explain some random urges, but what is the purpose of those random urges in the story? After all, you…[Read more]

@loopylin

Flying away is a great solution too. You just have to stay afloat, which is sometimes hard.

@loopylin

You do whatever you want. I don’t mind a slow pace, what with the end of the school year, and this roleplay is casual anyway! 😉

@keilah-h @loopylin @trailblazer

Yeeess those dreams are so weird!

I also consistently have lucid dreams, dreams where I manipulate the plot because I know it’s made up all along.

For example, last night. There was a murderous evil clown monster, and it was clearly turning into a nightmare… and I went straight up to that clown and whi…[Read more]