@whalekeeper
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whaley the great and terrible posted a new activity comment 1 year, 11 months ago
I’m glad the video gave you some ideas!
I don’t think Chase harms anyone. Marcel was frustrated with him when he left, but he didn’t leave because he was egregiously hurt, he left because Chase didn’t seem to put any effort into the interaction. Chase gets too hung up on his own dark vibes and believes people will leave him, which ends up being a…[Read more] -
whaley the great and terrible posted a new activity comment 1 year, 11 months ago
“yet letting no one inside his mind“
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whaley the great and terrible posted a new activity comment 1 year, 11 months ago
Oh and my color is pink lol
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A pink black horse ridden by a Nazgul with bows in its mane
The mental image is vivid-
I can’t wait to see how this picture turns out 😂
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Oh, believe me, you will either be laughing so hard you can’t breathe or extremely upset with my art.
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I am sure it will be the former 🙂
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whaley the great and terrible posted a new activity comment 1 year, 11 months ago
Okay okay um…
As a character, I would be that one floaty ethereal friend who gives advice to the main character just when they need it most. I might be kind of intimidating at first though… that’s what people say about me.(For irl inspiration I am tall, gaunt faced, with choppy jaw-length hair)
As an object, I would be a compass or a stuffed unico…[Read more] -
whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Thanks for the opinions!
XD they probably haven’t asked because you’re a little more private with your writing. I figured I’d just let you know I’m interested <3
XD Yeah, it’s 100% my fault for not making any effort. Thank you for the support though, maybe I’ll post something because of that :]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Dystopian Worldbuilding in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 11 months ago
Ohh okay okay okay…
Just take a second to relax, cuddle up in the blankets or something (I’m messaging in bed XD), and remember you are not the problem. You are not the problem for being indecisive. Of course you are going to second-guess this – I know I would – because it’s hard to picture which future is better for you in…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Outlining Thread in the forum Plotting 1 year, 11 months ago
Heeeyy thank you! And yes, visuals are sooo helpful!! I really recommend color coding. It can be overwhelming at times, but it feels like a huge step up from containing everything in your head.
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Outlining Thread in the forum Plotting 1 year, 11 months ago
Is it just me, or do we need more tips for creating actual hands-on plot?
Like, I like learning about plot points, but brainstorming the actual meat of those points – “the zombies attack here and trigger the electric grid in xyz cities” – is hard. And no one really talks about it.
Why should I include a zombie attack at this moment? Are these…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Outlining Thread in the forum Plotting 1 year, 11 months ago
You mean you’re not going to publish it? 🥺🥺🥺
I didn’t say that. But I’m not going to say I will either, because I’m an undedicated uncontrollable teenager.
Sticky noooooootes. Those are perfect for this. I need to gimme some XD
Oh yeah, I’m familiar with Fallacy Detective.
I think the most similar a…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible posted a new activity comment 1 year, 11 months ago
He’s going to LOSE AN ARM!!!
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Geez, Whaley😂😂 Who do you think I am??? XD
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Ummmmm idk an SURGEON WITH A KNIFE
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😂😂😂😂 you good, Whaley?? I’m a little concerned😂
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whaley the great and terrible posted an update 1 year, 11 months ago
First night sleeping in my own bedroom!!! No siblings… I feel like I’ve lost a limb. O.O
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LUCKY!!!!!!!!!
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Oh wow!!!!!!!!
I love having my own room XD I missed my sister at first but I got used to it *shrugs*
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 11 months ago
You’re doing great Sara 🥰 You are brave to try counseling even though it sounds potentially scary and sensitive.
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 11 months ago
I’m glad you’re feeling better btw! ❤️ And I promise I am not thinking badly of your writing behind your back. I sometimes feel that way about my own writing, and I have self-esteem/anxiety issues myself about being secretly hated. I think you are a very capable writer on KP and definitely braver than me for sharing this…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 11 months ago
Oh wow, a lot happened, and I’m overwhelmed just reading this conversation 😅 I can’t address everything y’all and Sara said, but I have a few small thoughts.
About the Pythonos’ redeemability:
I didn’t mean to imply that they can’t be saved! I just meant that they wouldn’t have any draw to be saved, so they can never be sa…
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whaley the great and terrible posted a new activity comment 1 year, 11 months ago
Ummm I’mma return to this in the morning when I have the brains to comprehend this conversation 🤣
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Dystopian Worldbuilding in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Ugh I posted something long and it didn’t work XD
Min has way more experience with dystopia, so listen to her. But I’m working on a dreampunk/fantasy dystopia, so I have a feeling for the genre.
Dystopias are all about taking a philosophy or point of worry in the modern day, and running with it as far as you can in a hypothetical scenario. It’s…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 11 months ago
Hey girl! I love how consistently you’re working on this! Here’s a small critique which you don’t need to read right now if it will potentially overwhelm you ❤️
You’re so selfish…you’re a horrible friend, why do you think she’d ever want you, little Payne?
You shouldn’t even be alive.
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Don’t tell anyone…they…
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 11 months ago
Farimiiiiiiirrrrrr
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whaley the great and terrible posted an update 1 year, 11 months ago
Hey @rae . I found an interesting video on YouTube which reminds me a lot of Chase. It’s about several types of trauma response. Type 3, The Darkness, feels a lot like Chase’s personality in the POV scenes/roleplays you share. I cannot guarantee this channel is accurate within the psychology world, since I just found it randomly XD But it might be…[Read more]
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Thanks for this! I can’t check it out right this moment, but I’ll try to get to it tomorrow. Probably will be after eleven though, since I have rowing class in the morning.
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So I watched it, and I’d say it does fit Chase.
About the vacuum, I never intended, when I first created Chase for him to be so dark. Originally, he was just a simple kid with powers who was trying to conquer the shadow of his past. His story was much lighter and more happy back then than now. Once joining the rp he currently is in, I began…[Read more]-
I’m glad the video gave you some ideas!
I don’t think Chase harms anyone. Marcel was frustrated with him when he left, but he didn’t leave because he was egregiously hurt, he left because Chase didn’t seem to put any effort into the interaction. Chase gets too hung up on his own dark vibes and believes people will leave him, which ends up being a…[Read more]
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This is true