whaley the great and terrible

@ellette-giselle

Whatever you want to do!

@linus-smallprint Please correct me if I’m wrong about guys

The illustrations are great! I love the sibling drawing.

I don’t know what that would be! If they were girls it would be easy! I just don’t know how guys “connect” and whenever I try to write it my brothers look like they’re going to throw up. They say I make them too girly in their getting to know each other, so I just kinda steer clear. An…

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Oh wow I missed y’all’s messages XD

@ellette-giselle

I would still love feedback on the other stuff as we went, but I’m a little at a loss with Aaron at the moment.

Thank y’all so, so much. I hope y’all can tell that this really is helpful…… I can see there’s a problem now…… I just have to fix it………

I understand what it feels like to get mixed feedback about a character, it’s so fr…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

My goodness Whaley!!! You put into coherent thoughts what I’ve been trying to say this whole time XD XD I wish I could convey my thoughts as well as you lol!

No prob! And no bad thoughts from you about yourself!! I only convey thoughts well through journaling/writing :] Trust me, if you knew me irl, I am quite slow with my t…[Read more]

Sorry Sara, I tagged you in the above message instead of Ellette. So if you get an extra notif, that’s why. 😅

@savannah_grace2009

oh nooooo!! Say it isn’t so!!

I’m sorry 😭😕

I love Aaron so much!! He is my secret big brother, and now he’s under attack!! Ok, I will try to take into consideration what you two have been saying. It’s going to be hard, especially since he’s perfect in my mind, so it’ll be tough to figure out how to improve him.

It might be…[Read more]

Aight I’ll resurrect it with some ranting

@loopylin @mineralizedwritings @savannah_grace2009 @rae @godlyfantasy12 (Asked for tags but she’s gone 😥)

I’ve never gone crazy over my own characters because it’s not my personality I guess. But I just want to say, I have a semi-new character relationship which is actually my favorite right now.

In one…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

It is!! I will probably post some more ideas soon.

I also don’t think everyone needs my advice/ideas because each person thinks in their own way. But I don’t know who will randomly see this topic and be helped by it. So again, anyone can give tips here because it might be of use in the future.

@loopylin

I like the Twins’ cute scrunchy noses

Hey Ellette! I read through all the scenes so far, and although I’m not going to do a scene-by-scene critique, I can give you overall thoughts. Please read this with a grain of salt! 😅

I like the Crusades-ish concept, where different people are invading Ardenta partially to spread their own belief system. It makes Aaron look like a go-between and…[Read more]

Oh sorry haha I thought you meant it would be on that date. Never mind, perfect.

I’ll join. :] If it’s August 1st, it will have to be before 12:00 EST because I have a birthday party at 1.

Correction: it IS 12:00

@savannah_grace2009

Okay good! I’m always paranoid that I annoy people or overwhelm people…that’s another thing I have to work through! My goodness I feel so broken 🤣🤣

You’re good, all good!! Hey, I feel annoying too so you’re not alone 😂 So many teens feel bad about communicating their feelings and they shouldn’t have to feel bad. They’re sti…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings @loopylin

I’m not going to beat myself up! Was that beating myself up? *Shakes head wildly* …I put the blame on me because I didn’t want anyone to feel guilt over not asking to be tagged. It’s true, I’m a private writer, and it is my decision to post anything. That’s what I meant to say.

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@loopylin

*gasp* Wait… do I know this character or not? Do tell. Now.

@elishavet-pidyon

I’m not sure about different kinds of scars, but I figure if you’re aiming for simplicity, you can draw it in a way that communicates the basic effects of that particular wound. Zuko from AtLA has an obvious burn scar. But it’s not complicated. It’s ju…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

My thoughts are at your service 🥰😅 And you don’t overwhelm me! Only certain kinds of people/moods overwhelm me.

I don’t have that many close friends, except one–but it’s awkward because he’s like three years older than I am, and he’s graduating this year. I know he feels the same way as I do, like that it’s hard to fit in (be…

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