whaley the great and terrible

I know you already got help from Min and I don’t have much to say 🙂 But a couple things.

I keep using the same phrases to describe my character’s struggles, thought processes, or even how they’re interpreting the themes in their own lives.

It might help to not say those phrases at all. Brainstorm all the easiest ways to say your theme in the story…[Read more]

Little late here, but @mineralizedwritings @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint great art from all three of you 🙃 Everyone keeps improving so quickly.

@keilah-h

Thx for the thoughts. The ending is already planned out and I will not reveal anything. 😁

@lightoverdarkness6

I’m so glad you approve of his scene!!! I was worried for a minute there because I don’t know what his everyday life is like.

@rae

and the twin I really want to rp with is a young teen, but he’s rather immature.

My charrie is pretty good at monitoring immature children. I’ll try to get her in here if my mind is apt enough; I’ve been in RP burnout for quite some time lol.

@mineralizedwritings

He does not need to fight at all! Yes, you can give me a little bio if you want to.

@calyhuge I have not forgotten where we left off Seb and your characters. Would rather not right now, I’m not in the current scene anyway. Thanks for the suggestion tho.

@freed_and_redeemed

Yaayyyy I’m glad I got them right!!

It’s also funny bc I was going to log on and ask if you were still working on this yesterday but decided against it XXXXD

Mood tho :’) I have the plot allll laid out, it’s just a matter of writing it in between senior projects and my creative stuff.

@loopylin

Dude don’t apologize. It’…

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@keilah-h

Were the people back in their worlds notified about the selection? Like, taking my charrie as an example, will Crosshair’s peers (the Empire, the Bad Batch, whoever he’s working with right now) be like “hey, what happened to him? He should be here by now” or did someone come to them and say “Your friend has been selected for a game of s…

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@freed_and_redeemed

(and just so you know, your fun little comedic WIP is amazing and still has wonderful characters and amazing lessons and values within it even though it’s ‘just for fun’ 😉🥰)

Thank you, I hope to give it some meaning :]

@linus-smallprint

I’m sorry for being kind of sarcastic, I was very moody at the time of writing that post.…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Oh that’s so fun! Thanks for sharing😍😂 Yes, you can share music!! And the quote is all yours XD

@linus-smallprint

Oh someone wants to talk XD Okay

And yes, we should definitely avoid sinning, but that is not the only thing God requires of us. We are told to glorify God in what we eat and drink, and whatever else we do 1 Corinthians 10:31. This is a command, not a statement of the way things are. We need to actively seek to Glorify God. If…

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I am a little worried I took some of the POVs too far in my imagination, and if I did, I’m sorry. Some of them I interpreted humorously without thinking much about their actual story 😅

@keilah-h

😃

@rae

I actually pictured you would have a few pointers XD

I decided this Game realm would know everything about these characters and have everything to neutralize them. So even if Alpha was immune to everything under the sun, this realm will have something to control him. I guess it’s a cheat card, but y’know, I’m not a fair player. :-P…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Thank yooouuu!! It took me very long to write that. And you never know, each of your characters have roughly a 4% chance of winning.

I’m gonna go draw some fan art for this, be right back lol

Oooh that’s a good idea.

also this is gonna sound super morbid but if there’s gonna be death, then I wouldn’t mind seeing someone fall to Mundy’s…

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Also I’m sorry if this has worried you so much to make this post ❤️❤️ I hope you will feel peace of mind after this.

Ummm I think as long as you’re enjoying yourself and not entertaining any sin in your story, God’s on your side 🙃 God gave you a sense of creativity and you aren’t doing anything wrong by using it. I also believe it’s fine to tell a story just for the fun of it. God also created us to be perceptive, social beings who want to have fun togethe…[Read more]

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@loopylin

Loops’ District

Joe Schmo had seen many things in his life.

He barely shifted on his stool as the door to the ice cream shop creaked open, and a bell jangled above the open! sign. His gaze – covered by a pair of sunglasses – barely flickered away from the microwave, in w…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I don’t think young marriage is a sin! I acknowledge that young marriages can work well, as shown by Keilah’s existence XD Nor did I say young age induces divorce. I’m saying we shouldn’t blindly advertise young people to marry when there are potential emotional ramifications. I personally believe those challenges are better…[Read more]

Yeah I don’t want to talk about this anymore, Ellette clearly doesn’t want to discuss it 😅

it’s Ellette’s story, and she can do whatever she wants

I agree. LTBL is fine, the marriage bit is just a part of it anyway.

I think what I’m trying to ask, is what don’t you agree with in what we’ve said and why don’t you believe it? I’m not trying to be…

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