@whalekeeper
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whaley replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
Okay Shadow, I’m not going to move after this until you’re good to go. 🙂
Barnes
“Good,” she replied to Tenz.
Hugo began to stir. He stretched, and sat up, casually tracing the hearth with the tip of his foot. He reminded Barnes of a stray cat who used to haunt her front porch – grateful for the warmth, but undeniably exploiting…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic short scene! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 month, 1 week ago
Good choice.
Awesome, thank you! *Sees the cookie box is already empty* *Refills it with caramel popcorn*
It’s difficult to make this scene clear, because it is confusing from the character’s perspective. He is supposed to not know why this is happening. So… yeah. XD
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
@koshka @ellette-giselle and maybe? @raxforge
I’m confused, are we still in the basement or is something happening?
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whaley replied to the topic short scene! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@loopylin @rae @freed_and_redeemed
Awesome, thank you all <3
Barnes “disappeared” but she’s actually close by, getting something to cheer him up. Probably a bag of baseballs.
For someone that hasn’t been through that, I will be honest in saying that it took me a moment or two to kinda figure out what was going on
Good to know. Since I was just w…[Read more]
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whaley posted a new activity comment 1 month, 2 weeks ago
I need to sleep now, but thx for wanting to talk anyway <3
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whaley posted a new activity comment 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Pleeze survive, i don’t want natural selection to get you
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whaley posted a new activity comment 1 month, 2 weeks ago
You didn’t get kidnapped by a random stranger, did you?
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whaley posted a new activity comment 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Oh my goodness I didn’t see you, hiiiiiiiiii
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whaley replied to the topic short scene! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 month, 2 weeks ago
oh right, tags.
@mineralizedwritings @loopylin @freed_and_redeemed @rae @honestlyidontknowwhowantstoseethis
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whaley started the topic short scene! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 month, 2 weeks ago
I would love feedback on this scene!
Warning, a scene of a character getting very overwhelmed to the point of panic.
– Here it is –
The ball flew across the empty baseball field, and landed with a puff of dust.
“Wahoo!” Sebastian leaped, and pumped his fist in the air. His curls gleamed, bouncing over his dull navy jacket. “Take that, d…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Looks like Percival has pride issues XD
Barnes
Reid used Rowan’s cloak to prop up the sleeping boy’s head. The group then ate in silence, the sizzle of meat singing to keep them company.
“…Now we can turn to conversation,” Barnes remarked.
Just don’t expect me to start it.
She took her own bowl of food and set it to the…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@rae @theshadow (shadow, you can tell us to wait for you whenever you want :P)
Barnes
That was all Barnes needed. “Sit down now, or return in fifteen minutes.”
Two of the men – Percival and Rowen – still eyed each other like feral dogs. They sat without removing their blades from their waists. Reid slowly shifted his tendrils to the forefront,…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
*Eyes glued to the page* FeLoisity has been officially confirmed. Good, good.
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whaley replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Barnes
“It’s a sport.” Barnes held up a fist, and hit it against the palm of her other hand. “Like that.”
They halted at a hall junction. Following a smaller corridor, they passed golden lanterns, the light of which seemed to melt through the cracks of the stone walls like melted butter.
The corridor opened to a chamber. A…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
I have no clue. I think the castle is meant to be mysterious in every aspect, but also customizable, so you can make up rooms. Whatever lore it contains is probably in the earlier pages of this roleplay.
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whaley replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Newish revelation, there are many ways to write a socially awkward person.
Barnes
Emeline spoke cautiously. Of course she did. Barnes relaxed her shoulders and tried to look less sharp. “I enjoy accounting, and also fight well. I… do you know boxing?”
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whaley replied to the topic Write to bring me pain. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Are you exploring a world where legal marriage (all the rights and arrangements within marriage as upheld by law) is no longer a thing? If so, person could still get together with their “special other” and make a promise to remain with them, and I think God would certainly accept that.
Lol you have me thinking about this too…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Write to bring me pain. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Right, I’m aware of those social movements. From what I can tell, what you’re describing is a very radical position and to “destroy” marriage in the sense of forbidding it altogether is not likable in most American circles.
Yeah, it’s an interesting topic.
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whaley replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Shadow awakens! Yay!! 🤗
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whaley replied to the topic Write to bring me pain. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Lol, quite appropriate 🙃
Ooo, that was interesting to research. It looks like marriage abolitionists are mostly against the issues which can be glossed over within marriage due to its legal status, such as financial and physical abuse. Ofc I don’t agree with some of their philosophies, but I agree that those…[Read more]
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I survived, thanks for worrying XD My parents finally arrived.
Yay 😁
Good night! <3