@whalekeeper
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whaley started the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 1 hour, 1 minute ago
Summarize your story in one weird sentence!
It needs to be both accurate and strange at the same time! This is just for fun; I don’t recommend you put this summary on the back of your book. But it takes a dose of creativity.Here’s an example with Lord of the Rings (the summaries can be longer than this): A guy with hairy feet can’t let go of hi…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 hour, 36 minutes ago
My beautiful baby and his beautiful snoot
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whaley replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 hour, 56 minutes ago
I like it! I like how you’re beginning to integrate action on Sef’s part. I definitely want to see an explanation for why she is stronger than other people the pythonos use. I’d guess her strength comes from hope, but she doesn’t seem to have any up until this point.
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whaley posted a new activity comment 2 hours, 29 minutes ago
Congrats, that must have been super exciting!!
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 22 hours ago
If you didn’t know, this is the roleplay Jonas started. I personally loved this roleplay idea and it would be nice to continue.
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whaley replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 22 hours ago
Is there something you’re struggling with that requires some brainstorming? What was that epic plot idea and why did you like it? I don’t mind helping. I like brainstorm sessions, lol.
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whaley replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 days, 21 hours ago
No offense, but somebody has already been called unbiblical for believing in old Earth when we haven’t even defined these terms yet. And I don’t think that’s great. I feel like it’s jumping the gun.
Can somebody define ‘young Earth,’ ‘old Earth,’ and ‘biblical’ please? There are different versions of old Earth, and ‘unbiblical’ is being thrown…[Read more] -
whaley replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 5 hours ago
Awesome sauce
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whaley replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 5 hours ago
You can message me with the link too
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whaley replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 5 hours ago
Oh wait, I forgot about this! When did/does it start?
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whaley replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 4 days, 5 hours ago
To be fair, the Hebrew might allow for a something similar to fathering a nation when it says ‘this guy fathered this guy.’ Which would then not be dependent on time. I’m curious about this so I’ll have to ask my dad, he’s the Hebrew nerd.
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whaley replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 4 days, 13 hours ago
I don’t care too much either way. It’s not important to the Gospel or to proving the Bible.
The Bible implies a young Earth but doesn’t explain it outright. The Earth scientifically looks like it’s old but there are inconsistencies.
Jonas pointed out starlight. God wanted the lights to appear on the fourth day. Could the fourth…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 13 hours ago
Barnes
For a second, Barnes imagined one of the cat monsters swallowing Mel whole. She watched the girl stroll down the path and pass beyond the tree and ferns. When the last fern stopped swaying from being pushed aside, Barnes stepped off the pavilion and followed at a distance.
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 13 hours ago
Good luck!
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 22 hours ago
Barnes
Barnes skimmed her hand over a cluster of flower bulbs on the pavilion. They looked more familiar to her now than at any other time- maybe because of how their colors grayed by moonlight. “I’m looking for a way back to my city. But I don’t want you to get lost too. You should find your way back before that happens. Not to say…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 5 days, 4 hours ago
I’ll keep working at it then 👍
(Haha, that’s how it is sometimes. Especially when you have a project you don’t have the bandwidth to pick up for large amounts of time.)
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 4 hours ago
Barnes
Mel didn’t shiver from the cold at all, and her coat wasn’t wet; she bit her lip and studied the garden as if she owned the place herself.
“No. I’m trying to get out of here, actually.” Barnes adjusted her mask by grabbing the chin and pushing up. “Do you mind telling me why you’re here?”
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 4 hours ago
Guys, my story snippet got chosen for critique for Crazy Editing Week out of a thousand people!! I’m very happy.
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 8 hours ago
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