WalkByFaith

@loopylin

Of course you can join!

@savannah_grace2009

Should we do a traditional… Victorian themed masquerade ball? And where should it take place? France?

@thearcaneaxiom

Makes sense. Though that leaves me with some questions about the first chapter still. Why give Jordan and his wife such a beginning? Despite making it obvious that they are evil, you’ve humanized them by giving them a dying child, and having them feel grief. Also, why did you project Kratos in a negative light almost directly, w…

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@trailblazer

hopefully Kari and Ottoline will be friends! They have some things in common!

Pics arent working for me, but I think if your interested you can find it under the topic, Anyone like moodboards? in the Art section!

@savannah_grace2009 @mineralizedwritings @grcr @hybridlore

Here’s my character who will be attending the party! Meet… Hugo Jim Walton. @grcr Hugo seems to be a lot like Lane, so they might be good friends! 🙂

He’s brave, bold and talkative, yet a bit annoying. 16 years old. Wears ripped jeans and graphic shirts, tennis shoes. Favorite color is g…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Sure since that’s what it sounds like everyone wants.  This is gonna be fun!

@grcr I love british accents!!!

@hybridlore

Sure since that’s what it sounds like everyone wants.  This is gonna be fun!

@grcr I love british accents!!!

@grcr

yep! Sounds good! So @savannah_grace2009 is this a costume/masquerade party then? We should probably all describe the costumes, unless y’all want to just make it up as we go XD

Yeah I still can’t and I’ve tried every day 🙁

@jonas

That’s okay! 🙂

@esther-c @grcr @acancello @mineralizedwritings @hybridlore

Ottoline is very excited to join the party!

She’s about 5’1 with mid length strawberry blonde hair. She was kidnapped by Pythonos as a baby and experimented on until she escaped at thirteen. So she’s very shy and has a little PTSD from being abused.

She normally wears browns, grays,…[Read more]

@esther-c

Your welcome! (and thank you! 🙂 )

@savannah_grace2009

Oooh this sounds super fun! I will share some of my characters later today when I have time! Maybe we could do a Masqurade ball? Thats sorta like a costume party, but then, mushing a whole bunch together would be fun, like @grcr said!

@grcr I don’t know what kind of party it is, haha! You guys can decide, but I have some ideas.

A birthday party? (I wasn’t sure on this one, because we’d have to decide who’s birthday it is)

A costume party?

A fall harvest party?

A super bowl party?

These are just random thoughts, so if you have more, please post! Thank you!

@savannah_grace2009
I’ll do it! If I can figure out what character to use XD

@kydonandwillow

I love it! I have the same thoughts as Cloaked Mystery. Also it might help if you spread out the chapter a little more. The events seem to happen really fast, and the reader barely has time to process before the next event happens. Sorry if that doesn’t make sense, I’m not good at explaining what I mean, haha!  Maybe go more into…[Read more]

@jonas

i like your idea for your universe and books on each of the planets. I had an idea for that once, but it kind of fell apart. Good luck with yours!

@whalekeeper

You’re right, I think it all comes down to personal opinion and morals and your own personal boundaries. If someone wants to write about magic, I would say go for it, as long as they’re careful. And I agree that it is very controversial. I’ve just chosen not to put “good” magic in my story, because that’s just what I believe and what…[Read more]