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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @hybridlore @acancello @esther-c @scoutfinch180
Okay…part TWO of the sad scene…
Lilitu walked briskly down the dimly lit streets, Sef’s emaciated form in his arms.
Though his foot pained him, he could barely feel it now.
His body thrummed with adrenaline.
She was so weightless….his stomach turned. He could feel every bon…
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
It just occurred to me that they’ve known each other for less than a day…. 😐 😂
Sef and Chase have only known each other for half an hour, and at least on Chase’s end, he’s already about asking her to the dance! (I have a grand scheme going on with him)
Xandro still on a sugar high from that candy? XD
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
I think the only thing that wasn’t the best was the color of the words. I liked the font, but I felt like with some of pictures it was hard to read.
Yeah…I was a little worried about that. Thank you for the feedback!
But that’s all. And where do you find all your adorable couple pics???
Uhhh…I wish I could give you some smart ans…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@freedomwriter76 HANS!!!!!!!!!! I still love you <333
Still waiting for you to change your mind…I know, I know, not gonna happen, but no one’s not called me stubborn and not meant it! -
SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Okay!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Livia
She smiled as if to reassure him, unsure of what to say.
And then she felt a familiar warmth on the back of her neck.
“Xandro!” she turned around, letting go of Lukas’s hand and hugging Xandro’s neck. He snorted.
“I know, I know, I may have forgotten about you…” she hung her head guiltily. Xandro grabbed Lukas by the…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
I know…he makes me SO MAD!!!
You can give her hot cocoa and blankets…she needs it…😭😭😭
Don’t worry…Lilitu’s rescuing her <333
OH MY GOODNESS YOU PUT LEFSE IN YOUR SIGNATURE!!!! That means so much to me!
Thanks for reading it <33
I wrote it in English at school (we weren’t doing anything and had free time) and was…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@freedomwriter76 (you might have to call the protection squad on this one….) @hybridlore @acancello @esther-c @scoutfinch180
Here’s a chapter I just wrote…I’m pretty happy with it but it’s SO SAD!!!
“Sef!”
She heard the door crash open upstairs, and her heart plummeted to the soles of her feet.
It was late.
Very late.
The odds that Ive…
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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 7 months ago
Small droplets of sweat rested upon Nahim’s face. Parts of his shirt were soaked. Smeared streaks of grease and oil from his hands and forearms, absent of gauntlets and gloves, marked his pale face. What time was it? He didn’t know, but it couldn’t have been a full thirty hours yet.
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Ruth replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
I mostly made up charries then because at night I had loneliness issues, even though I’m a sibling child. Even now, the night is when my charries chat.
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Ruth replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
I knew they existed, but I didn’t watch the Marvel movies until I was, like, around 14-15 or so lol. 😂
XDXD that is very funny to me cuz I am 14!
If you didn’t watch marvel movies with her she would’ve been watching disney princess movies like every other girl
I never liked Disney princesses…the only one I like is the 2…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
I think I’ll keep Ottoline. Since Marcurious wasn’t here originally I don’t think I’ll keep him.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
That’s so cute! I love Ev <3
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
It was so sweet! <333
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
In all seriousness, I think first we need a setting. Are we gonna keep Lillen? If not, do you want me to create a new culture, or is someone else going too?
Are we gonna start with a fresh slate of charries showing up?
Are we keeping the same plot?
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
I have an insanity problem with dragons…if you haven’t noticed XD
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
May I suggest we begin with a bunch a inspirational dragon pictures? I have some new Toothless ones.
Okay, okay, yes I know. I’m being ridiculous XD
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@whalekeeper @loopylin @savannah_grace2009 @jonas
Chase Duke
The pressure from the demon’s arm grew lighter, but the magic still swirled about Chase. He didn’t know what to do, if he stayed where he was, he’s loose both his consciousness and his snake form. Moving, fighting was his best option, but how should he move?
I’m wasting time. I need…[Read more]
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