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Ruth replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
Just pulled this from another forum…
I think that is all I have for now on Glace.
Btw, this all happened over a hundred years or so, since Fettians and Realn have long lives (thinks to some immortal blood.)
#HugRikerSquad
#LetsCauseChaos
BEWARE my charries know how to make swiss cheese! XD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Aww poor Lukas!!!!
Livia
She didn’t know whether to be hurt, or laugh. But then she saw the horrified look on Lukas’s face, and the way Xandro glared at him, and then she burst out laughing.
“I walked right into that one,” she laughed, “You do have a point, though,” she said thoughtfully. She saw the pained look on Lukas’s face and…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
@scoutfinch
*Bangs head against wall* I’m sooooo sorry for using the word gungedal! It’s the dwarven word for gun in my world, and is abbreviated as gun sometimes in the story, but I love the longer name, so I accidentally use it a lot.
Look into railguns, they are basically really expensive modern blasters.
My brothers have an obsession with…[Read more]
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hanako replied to the topic Hello, good people! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 9 months ago
Hi, Raegan! Welcome to Kingdom Pen! I’m Nevaeh and I’m sixteen years old. I’m also a homeschooler.
Children’s books! That’s awesome. What ages do you like to like to write for? Do you create illustrations for them?
I hope you like it here on kp.
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Ruth replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 9 months ago
I’ve…I need prayer. If anyone’s noticed my updates on my profile that occasionally pop up, you’ve probably already guessed I’ve been going through something, and you’d be correct. Behind RAE is someone who feels lost in a fog, and can’t get out…someone who feels alone inside. On the outside, my life has been ocean waves. I won’t say more than…[Read more]
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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 9 months ago
Disappeared, gone. Gone maybe forever.
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Ruth replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
The first Bucky one…💕💕💕💕💕😍
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Ruth replied to the topic Most Common Character Traits? in the forum Characters 2 years, 9 months ago
So…I think that’s why I write more masculine than feminine.
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Ruth replied to the topic Most Common Character Traits? in the forum Characters 2 years, 9 months ago
Yeah, I feel you. And @jonas is right, our culture doesn’t even know what a good family looks like, let alone a good woman.
I think the other side of the coin for me is that I don’t really understand myself. Like, I understand Nahim, and Chase, even…even Terry Darr, more than myself. I’ve honestly have kinda lost…me in the…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Chase Duke
Drip. Drip. Drip. Water splashed into Chase’s hair. His knees were brought up to his chest, an his face was hidden in his arms, resting on his patellas. He shivered and looked up, just as rain began to fall. How long he had been in the alley was unknown to him, but he kneit had been at last a coup!e hours. His head throbbed,…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Chase will be at the dance lessons, I’ll rp that. may take a while though.
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Ruth replied to the topic Most Common Character Traits? in the forum Characters 2 years, 9 months ago
It’s not as scary as you may think, lol! I’m a girl who tends to hide her emotions/stuff away her emotions, so I do understand men more in that vein. But I think it’s also important to remember that not all men are those tough guys that stuff everything away, have a stiff upper lip, and all those other stere…
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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 9 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium I LOVE YOUR PFP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Ruth replied to the topic Most Common Character Traits? in the forum Characters 2 years, 9 months ago
@freedmwriter76
My MC’s tend to be men (idk, they’re easier to write somehow🤣)
I’m not alone!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Anyone want to critique my plot? in the forum Plotting 2 years, 9 months ago
Yeah, I get it now! It’s simply the power of resistance and the fact that none of the other Paynes know that they’re being lied to. So Sef will have to confront her lies in a more obvious way than most books.
Yep! Exactly.
That makes sense! And yeah, definitely don’t feel like you have to take any of my advice… It’s totally up to you…
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Ruth replied to the topic Most Common Character Traits? in the forum Characters 2 years, 9 months ago
I never really go into dyed hair, most of it’s their natural color, I even cringed when I had Terry Darr dye his hair blond for a couple weeks. Reason: I actually promised my grandmother I would never dye my hair.
I also rarely go into makeup with my charries too. Reason: idk, maybe cuz most of them are warrioresses, or too young in my opinion to…[Read more]
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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 9 months ago
I dug deep into Chase’s heart, and I found a hole. A hole that he wants filled. I dug into Nahim’s heart and found a hole, a hole he wants filled. I dug into my own heart, and found a hole, a hole I want filled.
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Chase Duke
“I’m sorry I bothered you.”
Marcel rushed out of the shop, and slammed the door behind him. Chase sat alone, stunned. What did I do? He remained there for a few minutes, before rushing out himself. Marcel was nowhere in sight. What did I do?! Frantic, Chase pulled his hoodie over his head and made for the city streets. He thought h…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
What is wrong with Seb? Does he have mental issues or something?
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