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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
We can have them talk…but if you want we can for sure skip ahead!
Livia
“Sure!” she shrugged. “I don’t mind…I doubt Xandro would be allowed inside anyway.”
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Ruth replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Sounds good so far!
Jackson shows a level of respect for everyone and is usually the most behaved of the group. He does his best to keep Jamie in line, mostly because he would hate for her to get hurt, ever.
He can be sarcastic when wanting but will also encourage any of his friends when needed. He is not one to use his fists but will if…
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Nahim
As soon as his eyes opened, he had rolled over and pulled out his green crystal sword. Lord Nahim Nayhelm found himself in the middle of nowhere, having first awakened on his back in the middle of a soft-grassed field. Standing up, he surveyed the field and treeline. Nothing. No friends, no enemies. Nahim looked down and felt himself with…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@jonas @y’all
Sure! I actually have a good idea how it looks in my mind.
So the Lillen palace is set in a walled circle. Outside the circle is the city. The city is also formed in a circle, around the palace. A lot of white and pastel colors, mostly only low aesthetic walls for defense, except the thrown-together defences for the seige.
Inside…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
@anyone-stalking-the-forums
LILITU!!! AHHHH
Sef was pulled from her sleep with a touch on her arm.
She flinched and pulled back, retreating deeper into the covers.
“Sef, it’s only me,” she heard Indie’s voice.
She dared to peek out from her cocoon.
Her pain had diminished immensely, though her knee still throbbed.
The thought that haunted…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
I’m gonna keep Black Sky, but if you want no other dragons, that’s fine. I usually have a grand villain with a bunch of minions and allies (think Emperor Palatine-like villain) and Black Sky is that villain for Lillen.
Lillen
Pressed upon all six points of the star, Lillen begins to fall. King Altin lies upon his deathbed, wounded in battle. Now…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@beth-torres too
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Okay! everyone ready for our first rp? I’m gonna do a introductory Lillen one.
@highscribeofaetherium @princesachronicle22 @jonas @keilah-h
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Guys…sorry I know this is kind of a long segment…so just ignore this if you don’t have time!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
And then a bad guy POV….
SPOILER ALERT–Iver’s actually not real-real. He’s actually a Pythonos in disguise. Pythonos that use Dark Magick to take the form of other people are called Weavers. Anyways…
The Weaver awoke from his drunken state and beheld his disheveled apartment.
He closed his eyes and listened for the thrum of the girl’s h…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @hybridlore @acancello @esther-c @scoutfinch180
Okay…part TWO of the sad scene…
Lilitu walked briskly down the dimly lit streets, Sef’s emaciated form in his arms.
Though his foot pained him, he could barely feel it now.
His body thrummed with adrenaline.
She was so weightless….his stomach turned. He could feel every bon…
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
It just occurred to me that they’ve known each other for less than a day…. 😐 😂
Sef and Chase have only known each other for half an hour, and at least on Chase’s end, he’s already about asking her to the dance! (I have a grand scheme going on with him)
Xandro still on a sugar high from that candy? XD
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
I think the only thing that wasn’t the best was the color of the words. I liked the font, but I felt like with some of pictures it was hard to read.
Yeah…I was a little worried about that. Thank you for the feedback!
But that’s all. And where do you find all your adorable couple pics???
Uhhh…I wish I could give you some smart ans…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 HANS!!!!!!!!!! I still love you <333
Still waiting for you to change your mind…I know, I know, not gonna happen, but no one’s not called me stubborn and not meant it! -
SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Okay!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Livia
She smiled as if to reassure him, unsure of what to say.
And then she felt a familiar warmth on the back of her neck.
“Xandro!” she turned around, letting go of Lukas’s hand and hugging Xandro’s neck. He snorted.
“I know, I know, I may have forgotten about you…” she hung her head guiltily. Xandro grabbed Lukas by the…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
I know…he makes me SO MAD!!!
You can give her hot cocoa and blankets…she needs it…😭😭😭
Don’t worry…Lilitu’s rescuing her <333
OH MY GOODNESS YOU PUT LEFSE IN YOUR SIGNATURE!!!! That means so much to me!
Thanks for reading it <33
I wrote it in English at school (we weren’t doing anything and had free time) and was…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 (you might have to call the protection squad on this one….) @hybridlore @acancello @esther-c @scoutfinch180
Here’s a chapter I just wrote…I’m pretty happy with it but it’s SO SAD!!!
“Sef!”
She heard the door crash open upstairs, and her heart plummeted to the soles of her feet.
It was late.
Very late.
The odds that Ive…
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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 8 months ago
Small droplets of sweat rested upon Nahim’s face. Parts of his shirt were soaked. Smeared streaks of grease and oil from his hands and forearms, absent of gauntlets and gloves, marked his pale face. What time was it? He didn’t know, but it couldn’t have been a full thirty hours yet.
Stepping back, Nahim viewed his work with the wires in the panel…[Read more] - Load More
