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@writerlexi1216

Hey Lexi!!  I’m kinda late, but I’ll read this in a minute and give you some feedback soon!!  Super excited!!!!  Three cheers for being brave!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🎊🎉😉

@e-k-seaver

Hey Em!!  I loved your story!!  Sooo good!!  I don’t really have many critiques, just watch out for some repetitive words.  And maybe give Celeste a stronger goal/personality trait?  I felt like I was reading from Melia’s POV a lot of the time (which wasn’t necessarily a bad thing 😉) cause Celeste isn’t a bold character.  I say this…[Read more]

@e-k-seaver

Sounds great! I’ll give you the feedback ASAP:)
(I give everybody this warning: I’m a pretty slow reader:)

@godlyfantasy12

That is an excellent idea! I’m going to have to get the printer operational and do that. Thanks you:D

@godlyfantasy12

That’s alright, the post showed up in my notifications bar:)
Congrats on your word count! You can totally make the 30,000 milestone tomorrow! New lights sound super cool too *sigh* I really don’t have a single place to hang up my character aesthetics… but if I did, I’d be going nuts hanging them up everywhere XD

As for my WIP,…[Read more]

(Okay, maybe that belonged in the meme topic:)

@nova21 @devastate-lasting

Those are beautiful:)

@daisy-torres

Heyo!!!  Ooo YAY!!!  I love the title…

Oh. my. gosh.  I ADORE this simile sooo much!!!

Aaahh, my eyes are watering already!! 😢

You did it again–girl, you got skills!! 😃

*cue jaw drop*

Maybe instead of “this child” again, you could write “Bridgett”?  there was a little repetitiveness.  So sad!…[Read more]

…and one for Emiyn and her brother, Iszac: (i’m running out of ideas, people–they’re just so fun to make!!! 😂)

@devastate-lasting

thanks!!  haha? 😂  I didn’t know it was a unisex name… 🤔

@gracie-j

thanks!!

Here’s one for Emiyn and her dad:

Here’s one for the POVs (who are sisters), Aven and Emiyn:

@issawriter7

@writerlexi1216

That is so good!! I just LOVE Newton! There are literally only three characters in all existence (and in my whole life) that I’ve ever fangirled about and Newton is so definitely one of them!! (the rarely seen fangirl side of me is internally screaming right now). 😀 😀 😀

@nova21

It was my pleasure! 🙂

@gracie-j

Personally, I’ve never had to use the Cast of Characters list (The Snow Warrior only has five immediate characters), but I think “reoccurring cast” lists are excellent:) In fact, I kind of wish I had enough characters to make a cast list.
As for the spoilers aspect; spoilers have never really bothered me (except in mysteries of…[Read more]