@trailblazer
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Apologetics in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 7 months ago
Yeah, I see what your getting at. It’s a reasonable enough explanation. Where your saying Christ and the Holy Spirit swapped places, and the Holy Spirit is the aspect of God that is enveloping the Earth.
So the Holy Ghost is specifically the spirit of Jesus Christ, while still being the same spirit as the Father in a grander sense,…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Thank goodness!
@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @trailblazer @mineralizedwritings (I guess I’ll tag you again lol)
Alright! I am here!
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@esther-c @acancello @freedomwriter76 @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @trailblazer
Yall. I just realized my entire last rp didn’t upload… but I had it backed up in a word document! I hardly ever do that XD!!
Kaine
Kaine shudders, crossing his arms over his dark green sweater vest. A stiff breeze edges through the tight weave of his shirt, pushing…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
I like it!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Sorry Ottoline’s so rude to Kari, haha! Hopefully Kari can help her work through some hard things, and help her know God (though in Ottoline’s world He’s known as the Great One). Poor girl’s been through a lot, and Kari seems like a nice person!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@everyone @esther-c @acancello @freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @grcr @trailblazer @mineralizedwritings
Ottoline
She was done with this place. She had looked out the windows and saw the sun sinking lower in the sky…and if she was being honest with herself, this place was creeping her out. It reminded her of the UNIT, that feeling of…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@grcr @minerlaizedwritings @trailblazer @savannah_grace2009 @freedomwriter76 @esther-c
Aright, Hugo is going to join! Sorry if anyone characters are different from what they really would be like, its sorta hard to write them. 🙂
Hugo
Hugo trudged up a hill as the sun beat down on his back, “Where the heck am I going?” He thought, “wander awa…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Apologetics in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 7 months ago
Yeah, I’m a member of The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-Day Saints, and we believe that Heavenly Father, the Holy Ghost, and Jesus Christ are three distinct beings, though they are indeed one in purpose. (Please don’t burn me at the stake😅)
Yeah, absolutely, that’s the mentality that I strive for in…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
Me too XD and a new teacher, yay! I’m excited to see what happens next 😁
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
I love the story! I agree with @hybridlore that it wasn’t too summary-y but it would be nice to see how the interaction with Lillian Sara and Jennie went.
I love the dancing scene! I love Libbie and Albert, they’re so cute together! (It’s fine if that’s not what you’re going for but I just like “shipping” people in my stories and…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@trailblazer @esther-c @acancello @freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @grcr
Ottoline
She sighed with relief as Lane looked away from her scars and turned his attention to the girl in the doorway. But she knew it was only a matter of time before they would get brought up.
“Oh, no, it’s not my statue, or my house even…” the bewildered girl…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@trailblazer @savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @acancello @freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings
Great! 😆
Lane
Lane looked at Ottoline, accessing what kind of person she was. His eyes fell on her scars, and it reminded him of one of his friends back where he lived. His face vividly displayed a desire to ask about the scars, but he changed his…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @acancello @trailblazer @freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings
Got it, lol!
Lane
He listened silently as the two people exchanged a few words.
I should probably find out where I am…
Lane shivered before he stepped inside the building. He slowly walked to a small statue in the corner of the room. He reached…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @acancello @trailblazer @freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings
Alright! 😆 Here is mine.
Lane
Lane stared intently at the piece of paper in his left hand. Something was scribbled onto the note, but whatever it said was illegible. These directions never want to work, huh? Tyne never writes things down p…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @freedomwriter76 @acancello @mineralizedwritings @trailblazer @grcr
Ok! I finally got it! Here ya are!
(And fyi, so far I’ve decided that the language they speak in Amir’s country is Farsi, or something very close to it, so if he talks in a different language, that’s what it is.)
(Oh, and I’m assuming we decided on the bal…[Read more]
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Fernweh_Grace replied to the topic Hello!!! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 7 months ago
Hello, Janessa! That sounds awesome! I have a sister who loves to dabble with photography, and once-upon-a-time I had an idea for a novel set in the Victorian era. (I was inspired by the word ‘Pendragon’ that I found while reading a book by C.S. Lewis.)
That’s neat! I’ve had several family members that were pastors, and both of my…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@acancello @trailblazer @freedomwriter76 @grcr @mineralizedwritings @savannah_grace2009
😱 I wrote almost the whole RP and then accidentally tapped on one of the links at the bottom of the page and lost it! 😭 I don’t think I have time to rewrite the whole thing now, but I promise I’ll have it posted later today or tomorrow. 😅
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Light Warrior Pen replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 2 years, 7 months ago
You’re right, there probably would be a whole bunch of emotion on both sides. 🤔 I’ll have to work that in.
I might have to try that. Thanks! 😊
@trailblazer
Good point! Unfortunately, I haven’t really shown any of her favorite things yet. I guess I should probably fix that. 😂Wow, that’s awesome you…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
I don’t think it’s too summary-y, lol. It fits the style so far very well! I would’ve maybe liked to see the scene with Libbie hanging out with Sara, Lillian, and Etta in a non-summary kind of style, but if they’re not major characters, I think this works best. Great job so far, I’m really enjoying it! 😁
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