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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
Okay, I just couldn’t remember if they were courting or not. It’s been a while since I’ve read this XD
I kinda want Chester to change his mind and court Libbie, but it would also really hurt Etta and would cause more drama so I don’t at the same time. lol!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
Wait, so is Etta and Chester dating? I can’t remember XD
And I love it!!! It’s so perfect <333
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
Awww poor Etta!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
WHY DO I KEEP SPELLING YOUR TAG WRONG?!?!?!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
@jonas @thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium @rae @vinagirl @trailblazer @grcr @esther-c @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @acancello @hybridlore @anyone-else
Okay, guys. I need serious help. My novel is kind of going nowhere…because I don’t know which way to start it!!!
I have two beginnings for my story. One jumps straight into…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
I really like this scene!!!
Some ideas for plot twists:
Maybe she apologizes to Albert or something?? And then realizes that she does like him? Or something happens with her and Chester? OR A NEW BOY MOVES TO TOWN!!
Sorry, all my ideas seem to be centered around romance….lol
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RAE replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Kari would have been given beginner training in the use of a light weight sword. She would have weapons, but nothing too big since I doubt she’s strong enough to use a broadsword.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 4 months ago
Sorry, I keep misspelling it….XD
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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
I can’t wait for the next part! I don’t really have many ideas for plot events, but I’ll let you know if I think of any good ones! Yeah, probably reading other books like it would help.
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Beth replied to the topic Please say a prayer in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 4 months ago
Yeah, I really don’t think he has any clue. I think he’s started to get used to everything, but I don’t think he understands why it’s happening or why it’s necessary.
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Beth replied to the topic Please say a prayer in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 4 months ago
Yes, actually. They somehow don’t bother him whatsoever. He may get a bit nervous sometimes but he usually doesn’t react.
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Beth replied to the topic Please say a prayer in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 4 months ago
He is on insulin now, though it’s not much. I’m not even sure when they’ll let him get a pump. He is acting much better now since he started it, his glucose also isn’t skyrocketing as much.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 4 months ago
@trailblazer misspelled your tag XD
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Story Premise Idea in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 4 months ago
Interesting… If I had the Dark Lord die, I would probably want to have that happen at the very beginning of the story, with the idea of throwing everything into chaos. If he dies in the middle of the story, then that’s basically just a free win for the protagonists…unless something bad unexpectedly comes from it, like a new even…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Characters of England | A 19th Century Role Play in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @whalekeeper @rae @smiley @trailblazer
Emmy
She wandered through the halls, desperately hoping for a clue. She loved mysteries, but solving one was pointless without any direction. Almost ready to give up, her heart skipped a beat when she noticed the back door was ajar. Slipping outside, she noticed that there was a stable, and…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
It depends. It comes pretty easily to me, so I do well without having to.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Yes, but it can be pretty grueling sometimes.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Yep, with both my siblings!
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Smiley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Yeah I’ve been trying to remind myself of that but it hasn’t been easy
Thanks for saying it though, it’s nice to hear those opinions from more than just myself
I know God is always right and stuff, it is just kind of daunting to me XD
Personally, I read a lot more contemporary fiction than I do fantasy and dystopian.
Okay so if I’m…[Read more]
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Raegan Aubrey replied to the topic Hello, good people! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 4 months ago
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