Trailblazer

@ellette-giselle

Yes! Get Jim! Lol.

Just a guess. Can’t remember if we talked about this before, but I distrust characters’ “deaths” unless I get 100% proof that they’re dead because of all the “resurrections” in books, lol.

@ellette-giselle

Lol, yes, that may be stupid of Jonathan. But it makes a good story.

I kind of feel like 314 (was that the right number) isn’t really dead. We never got much evidence besides the Agent telling us he was. He could have easily run away or something. But we shall see.

Good chapters! Jim taking care of Jonathan was hilarious.

@ellette-giselle @theducktator @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint @keilah-h

It’s Tuesday again! Two new chapters on whichever document you prefer.

@elishavet-pidyon

I decided I loved it when Kyler sent Jace flying into the mystery visitor. XD

😂 Yay!

There were several places where either the syntax or word choice made the little reading voice in my head stumble, so I’ll come back and note those,

Great! I will look forward to those. I actually went over the doc and changed some of those t…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

😆 I’m excited to hear what you say!

Don’t worry…I sometimes miss things too.

@ellette-giselle

Oh, lol.

@ellette-giselle

Yeah…. Totally. *shakes head vigorously *

His backstory. First time we get to hear what happened to him.

@ellette-giselle

Augh! Really??

Rick is not a nice guy. 😠 And poor Jim!!

I love the dynamics you have going.

@theducktator

No worries! Thanks for getting back to me, though.

Great! From the three POVs, how would you describe those three fellows? Zahn, Kyler, and Guy.

@ellette-giselle

Lol.

I’m very curious to see what the rest of the book is like.

@ellette-Giselle

Hah! so there was a time jump!

Called it 😉

So the memories are coming back for Jonathan…

@ellette-giselle

I don’t know yet. 😂 Probably not great, but I mean at least the others are accepting him.

Okay!

@ellette-giselle

Good chapters! Nice to see Jonathan getting to see more of what the gang does. It seems like he’s becoming a full member.

@esther-c

I’ll be praying!! Have fun at volleyball!

And apparently our water heater is messed up too? 😭

Couple things that I’d appreciated y’all’s prayers for…

First, my volleyball tryouts are tomorrow!! A little nervous about that. Just pray that I’d do my best and stay humble.

Also our AC unit is acting up. 😖 And it’s annoying cuz we kinda need AC and we had to fix our furnace this past winter bc it broke down. So prayers for patience and…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Aw, poor Jim. I liked this section.

A young woman writes about the behavior of men she likes in a notebook and compares dating to avodacos.

That’s for the book I’m going to write during Jonas’ writing challenge. (…its not as weird as it sounds btw…) I’ve been trying to think something up for TPE, but I couldn’t.

After discovering that dragons aren’t as immortal as they seem, a corrupt monarchy attempts to take over the world–however, the children they kidnapped turn against them and keep interfering with their devious plans. 

This is for a new novel I’m brainstorming.