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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Our Book Premises Nerd Space in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Yeah, nothing I wouldn’t mind reading myself, not to mention a ten year old at our church. Especially when I’m trying to make a very Christain point about the passing of mantles. No need the have my good be evil spoken of!
Ugh, yeah, it is so irritating when a word is placed in the wrong era. I mean, some words don’t matter,…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Our Book Premises Nerd Space in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Nyx sounds woundermous! Definitely work him in. He’s so cute! If you have any scenes you could share, I’d be thrilled.
My sister and I created a fox type creature for one of her books. It’s called a Knettel and is about the size of a SMALL house cat, a bit more sleek than most foxes, with more pointed ears and a white ‘V’ from…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Our Book Premises Nerd Space in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Your book sounds well beat out. Is it one book or a series? YES, it IS intriguing!
What inspired Possibility? It sounds good and deep. And squirrels are so neat.
I’ve read GE too. They’re wonderful books.
If it’s not too much of a spoiler, where did the name A’Grend come from?
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Koshka replied to the topic Our Book Premises Nerd Space in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@trahia-the-minstrel
*Squeals in delight and commences a happy dance.*I shall try not to fill up the rest of this page.
Heart of Gold Heart of Stone (First in series) set in medievalish time
Ezekiel 36:26
Zlatan and Vulkasin are wolf twins, the only sons of Sotnik Vratislav. One of Vulkasin’s rash ideas throws the brothers into military…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Our Book Premises Nerd Space in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@trahia-the-minstrel OOOOH YAY!!! Alright bear 🐻  with me cuz I’ve only got the first draft and outlines and things of book 1 and other stuff for this series I’m working on so imma wing it a tad. Here goes!
How do you fulfill a destiny you didn’t ask for?
A tale of betrayal, lies, death and unwanted destinies.
Arabella, princess of A’Gren…
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Our Book Premises Nerd Space in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Hi! Gramercy for inviting me!
Your book sounds so intriguing! Yes, I’m hooked.
So, here are three of my premisses. (Yes, I stole them from one of my former posts. I don’t type that quickly)
Possibility (because that’s what it is): Aethelthryth was set apart from her very birth. Her father was a serf whom the King freed. H…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Worldbuilding in a dystopian novel in the forum Sci-Fi 3 years, 1 month ago
@trahia-the-minstrel yesssss!!!!! DO IT!!!!!
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Faith Q. replied to the topic Worldbuilding in a dystopian novel in the forum Sci-Fi 3 years, 1 month ago
Neat premise! I think it entirely depends on a ton of factors you haven’t told us. First, how old is Torrent? Nobody’s going to give a 12-16-year-old kid a bunch of backup for a rescue mission. (No offense to anyone in that age range; I’m 16 myself. I’m just sayin’ that you can’t put that in a book.) 17-18 is pushing it. On the other…[Read more]
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Keilah H. started the topic Worldbuilding in a dystopian novel in the forum Sci-Fi 3 years, 1 month ago
Hey everyone! Keilah here. I’m currently worldbuilding on a dystopian/sci-fi/fantasy world, and I’d like your feedback on it!
The premise I have so far (for the first book anyway, I might make it a series):
Torrent Starcatcher has had a hard life.
She was born into a universe in turmoil; the violent dictator Indy has been in control since before…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Dragon Lore and other things… in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@trahia-the-minstrel Ugh, I’ll have to repost it. And I’ll get a good Singeprime picture so you can see what they look like.
In the meantime, some facts about MandaloreWings, since you said you were curious: (I don’t have a good picture yet, sorry)
- They’re wyverns, meaning their wings are attached to their arms instead of coming out of their…
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Morgan replied to the topic Hi, I’m a Christian Fantasy Writer! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 1 month ago
Regrettably I don’t have a younger sister to tell stories to, however, that sounds like a wonderful way to hone in your story telling/book writing skills.
I can basically quote The Lion, the Witch, and the Wardrobe as well. I have seen it way too many times!
Ooh. An eagle would be cool! Come to think of it, I should add a…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Dragon Lore and other things… in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@trahia-the-minstrel I have pictures of Singeprimes and MandaloreWings, but I’ll have to find them and upload them.
In the meantime, here’s a diagram of a typical dragonman skeleton:
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Lydia S. replied to the topic Characteristic Lines in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
😉 <333
Agh, yes, I am a big GE fan! I do love the characters you mentioned, but my all-time favorite character is Helmer. HE IS THE BEST!!!! (I’m a big fan of crusty-and-tough-on-the-outside-but-soft-and-sweet-on-the-inside type characters). My favorite lines are pretty much anything Helmer says, but e…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Dragon Lore and other things… in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@trahia-the-minstrel I know you already saw this one, but he’s the only Stewjon Four-Winged drawing I have, so…..
Facts about Stewjon Four-Wingeds:
- They’re rare. Much more so than other dragonmen kinds.
- They’re awesome. Pure awesome. I mean, four wings, gills and webbed talons, fire, catlike ears (which work just like cats’ or…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Hi, I’m a Christian Fantasy Writer! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 1 month ago
@trahia-the-minstrel Yeah, that’s just like Ethan.
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Anatra replied to the topic Characteristic Lines in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
I’ll pray you’re not in the waiting stage for too long! I’ve heard that can be stressful 🙂
Those characters always make me smile. Ah, yes. Rebel Faeada XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Characteristic Lines in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Yes, and it sounds so good. Will you have a glossary?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Characteristic Lines in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@trahia-the-minstrel You’re welcome. I love writing Star Wars fanfics, especially dragon ones! And a word on Wings of Fire–the later books aren’t as good as the first five. Those are the best.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Characteristic Lines in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Oh, I love building cultures and hearing what other people have made!
Let’s see… I don’t know the ú sound, it might be Hebrew (I’m not very far in).
Keivan Rus is basically the name of a federation of Slavs in the 9th to the mid 13th century. The part I mixed in is mostly from the older northern groups. They were a…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Characteristic Lines in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Oh, oh, your names are lovely. Hebrew? My sister is learning Hebrew!
Your lines are great! I like Faeda, being short myself. And is Tyroll her older, or younger brother?
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