Trahia the Minstrel

@elishavet-pidyon I like it. I just really find it hilarious when characters act/talk like that…..

@avacoulter

Oh, no. Iron Man’s fine. I used to have this idea where he was an arrogant someone (who’s self-centered and covers it with sarcasm). My best friend and brother really like his character, and convinced me otherwise a coupe years back. I for sure see why–after the development arc he’s been through. I can respect him as a top-tier…[Read more]

@autumn-rebecca

Cool! Those stories sound interesting. I’ve never been brave enough to try to write something romance XD It’s always so intimidating to me. emotions are strange

I don’t meet many people who write non-fiction, is it based on a story? Personal experience? Historical events?

I currently have a fantasy WIP that I’ve built a series…[Read more]

@trahia-the-minstrel

Wow, Trahia! I love these, especially the second one. I love the two girls in the center of the cover. The hairstyle, clothes, and expressions show a lot about them. Who is the girl on the top of the cover? She looks like a very intriguing character and makes me wonder what she’s so worried over. I really like her design. E…[Read more]

@abigail-m

Oh that’s no problem! 🙃

@anatra23

I’m SO sorry, I just saw that your question was already answered! Yikes, sorry about that

@Koshka

Yes, that makes sense:)
Ooh, yes! The apostrophes make it much more clear, I think that works great! 😀

@anatra23

Yeah, it is the singer:) I got that a little confused the first time 🙂

@autumn-rebecca

Hullo! Welcome to KP, I’m Anatra.

Lol I also used to STRONGLY dislike reading (although I enjoyed comic books). Then again, at that time I was scared of everything but breathing, so it doesn’t surprise me XD

What sorts of things have you written? Working on any writing projects at the moment?

Random question: do you have a…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon Ha! I love those lines! They’re witty!

@abigail-m

Glad you like my story idea so much. Those are great thoughts too. I love hearing what everyone else thinks of as a good scene in a book generally.

Ahhh the snake with parylizing venom  was killed protecting her. She has to jump blindly out a small gap that could barely be called a window used to vent the prison. In a beaten…[Read more]

@not-so-secret-secret-assassin

Well then, I’ll take back the cross out ‘cause most comedians probably could take a couple lessons from you.
No problem, I love giving anyone and everyone that Yoda quote (like. All. The. Time.) XD Anyway, that IS a dilemma, but sadly I can’t help you too much there. I haven’t been on KP for a while, (I try to stop…[Read more]

@Koshka

Yes, that’s great! 🙂

@koshka

This is so pretty. I love the emotion!

@abigail-m mentioned this, but quick question,
Is the poem saying:

Here voices scream: “you’re still in pain,

This Dream and Hope are all in vain,“

Or would that be the singer saying that Dreams and Hopes are in vain?

(ty Elishavet, I’m sure the author appreciates it ^-^)

@annabelle

I agree I enjoy his books more, but some of his songs really hit home.

That’s cool that you can teach yourself. Do you use books, or online courses?

@not-so-secret-secret-assassin

That post you wrote is awesome! And is actually very helpful, (probably more so than several articles out there), so even though it was written for the awesome writer Elanor, I just wanted to say that it was very good and actually inspired me to write an escape scene for my current novel!

@elanor

This scene is stacking up to be very interesting the more I hear about it! My favorite part of this (I know, I’m a cruel writer to characters) is that Kedja knows she can’t escape and that only Zlya will be able to make it out of the prison. This is great story-wise because most escape scenes get pretty much everyone out without a ton of…[Read more]

Here’s my drawing! I took a picture of the illustration in the second book and colored it in, using the description in the book to figure out what color his feathers were.

@koshka

Hi, Koshka! I love this poem 😀 I visualized it being sung by a captive like you said it would be and think that that works wonderfully:) It felt wintery and mysterious and sad and hopeful. I especially loved the last stanza and how each line in it was its own yet completely tied together. So I think that’s beautiful.
Hmmm, the only t…[Read more]