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@theshadow

I really like this chapter! Everything critical I was going to say @hybridlore already covered.

I really enjoy these characters. I like how Jack sticks up for his sister, and I’m eager to find out what happens and where Elina got her scar!

make sure to keep tagging me because I’m really enjoying this.

and those girls giving her a h…[Read more]

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Sorry it took me a day to get back to you. Even though you said you didn’t like this first chapter much, I think it has potential. It introduces the characters and their world pretty well. It is a very short chapter. Is that normal throughout the book, or is this the exception? It’s fine to have shorter chapters, but I think it might…[Read more]

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Fantastic! I’m so excited to read what you wrote!

@theshadow hmmmm….Interesting! we’ll have to see where it goes.

@theshadow lol they’re nothing like each other but hey, that works.

@the_lost-journal funny enough I don’t find those guy names ugly.

They make me think of grumpy old men, but not necessarily in an “ugly” kinda way.

@rae @theshadow

Kinda random, but I wasn’t sure where else to ask this cause it technically is a drawing-related question: What did you guys imagine Old Hunter to be like? Did you have a specific appearance in mind for him when you read about him?

I was thinking of drawing him interrogating Huntress as an illustration for the fanfic, and I…[Read more]

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Please pardon me, everyone…I can’t believe I forgot about the deadline!!!!! So sorry about that…

Well, it looks like all things work together for good since Esthe…[Read more]

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The others:@power  @calyhuge  @whalekeeper   @theducktator  @elishavet-pidyon @the_lost-journal  @trailblazer  @jonas @beth-torres @euodia-vision @thearcaneaxiom @smiley  @freed_and_redeemed @loopylin @felicity  @savannah_grace2009  @koshka

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@theshadow cool! I’ll definitely read this. If nothing else, I’m returning the favor since I made you read mine XD

@theshadow Emmerich is a cool name.

I like it, although I’m biased cause I have an Emmerich in one of my own story ideas. He’s the main advisor to the mercenary-turned-king main character. (And no, this has nothing to do with TF2, it’s actually based off like 5 different games.) It’s his last name though, not his first one.

@theshadow

Yayy!! It sounds interesting—a little creepy, perhaps, but I’m intrigued!

@theshadow

Yep!!

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sounds interesting!

@theshadow

Emery, Colin, Jehan, Girard, Philippe, Lorin, Perrin, Nicolas, Richart and Olivier are French.

Some German ones are Alexander, Konrad, Hermann, Heinrich, Emmerich, Berthold, and Christian.

@whalekeeper @koshka @theducktator @hybridlore @theshadow @esther-c

Well, my dad just got a call from the police, and they arrested the lady who did it. He’s on his way to the police station right now to pick up his wallet and his keys and stuff. Take a look at that! God is good.

Chapters 5 and 6 are out! Same link as last time…

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1iTo1_yooHUC67Ve8ddKn2gCS0rK_fjpc0kh_NJu3Sig/edit

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@theshadow

First, have to clear out all of the uh… wonderful writing before posting it.

XD

Lol, I was rewatching an episode from Martha Speaks (I don’t care if it’s for kids it’s one of the greatest shows ever), and this line really spoke to me.

Oh my goodness *brings back memories* We used to love that show.  But I don’t remember that line, sadly xD

@hybridlore @keilah-h @theshadow

I came home from school today and the van was in the driveway! The police found it in a mall parking lot. The thief still has my dad’s murse, but we have our car back, so that’s great!

Thank you so much for your prayers 🙂

@theshadow

Yeppp!!!