TheShadow

@theshadow

just showing more of the city or government, to get a feel of how much the world has changed. Something like that, maybe. Maybe you could have Sara or Cole go to a different area,

Okay! I could always try to integrate that into scenes while they’re traveling (to the church meetings, to their jobs).

Ah, okay. That’s fine if your sti…

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Bruh…

Ok we’re gonna try this again.

@theducktator @savannah_grace2009 @keilah-h @theshadow @grcr @smiley

Chapter 4

“I haven’t seen Antonio all day… He must not be a sophomore.” Hallie stood on her tiptoes, peering over the heads of the students who roamed the cafeteria.

“You trippin’? I thought you didn’t care that much.” Jennifer pl…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Awwww!!!

But in six months he’s moving to Florida for college…..😭😭

At least I have a little brother <333 I love him to DEATH…I literally love him so muchhhh

That is so funny that your MC is named Hallie because (I know I’ve told you this before but Imma say it again hahaha) my little sister’s name is Hallie!!! so it’s just…

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Well, I made the forum, the forum stopped working for me, and I also disappeared off the face of the earth for over two weeks😂💀 well I’ll try to answer questions/responses now😅

@highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore @keilah-h @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @elishavet-pidyon @theshadow @thearcaneaxiom @whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @loopylin @koshka @trailbl…[Read more]

@theshadow

Ooh, I’ve also got to add in the part about the gov trying to pass a new law that allows them to persecute Christians, but I haven’t figured out when yet.

@theshadow

Great! 😁

Okay, I see what you mean. Are you thinking like, within their friend groups? Most of the story so far takes place either at school, the church meetings, or their house. Later, though, there will probably be a lot of scenes at their respective job assignments, so you’ll get to see more of the culture then. Do you have any i…[Read more]

@theshadow

Your welcome!

I’m looking forward to seeing the next part!

@liberty @rae @theshadow

Awww thank you so much!!!!!! <333

@keilah-h @theshadow

Praying for your relatives!🩵🩵🩵

@rae

Thanks for the article! Unfortunately I’m not very good at fight scenes either, so I won’t be much help. 🙁

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@theshadow

Praying as well! <3

@theshadow

Praying!!

@theshadow

Awesome! Thanks!

@theshadow

Ok, awesome, I’m glad you were able to catch on to what I was doing. :))

Alrighty!! : D

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Announcing the winners!!!!

First, like the previous judges, I will go over each story.

Shadow:

What a short, sweet story! You are sucked right into a conflict,…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Thank you!! 😊

@theducktator

Thanks!

Ummm… sort of??? I mean, I based it loosely off of my relationship with my older brother—we tend to get along for the most part and rarely, if ever, actually fight. Of course we do goof off, but half of what we goof off about would look so weird in a book. XDD

I know what you mean though, and I d…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @koshka @theshadow

Sorry you three! I got busy on Monday…then the KP web wasn’t working on Tuesday…but I’ll read them today. So, stay tuned!

@savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @grcr @smiley @keilah-h @theshadow

Chapter 1

“Why is it so hot?” Hallie Woodbury tucked a loose strand of ginger hair behind her ear.

“I only have two words that can answer that question: New. Mexico.” Easton straightened and tossed his light brown locks off his forehead with a quick shake of his head.…[Read more]

@theshadow thank you!!! I just threw him together quickly, not tryna make a masterpiece.

@theshadow

Linus is 💯 correct. Plus, the more you pause the more you lose your flow. For me, I turn off autocorrect and grammarly, and I just write and write and don’t look back until the whole thing is on paper. Beginning to end. Then you can go back and start editing and fine-lining and rewriting. Give yourself a foundation to build off of, o…[Read more]