TheShadow

@power

What is being donated again?

@power

I wish it was Gandalf… anyway, thank you. How have you been Power?

Um, I don’t really know what The Shadow is a shadow of. Maybe my former self XD.

Does it smell in here? I hadn’t noticed.

@loopylin

Hi, thanks for the welcome, it’s nice to see you too. I’ve been okay, how about you? How’s art going?

Praying for all of you!

@whalekeeper

And if you don’t enjoy rock, that’s fine. Sometimes certain genres bothers a person and they don’t know why. It’s just a fact of their life. Many country songs rub me off the wrong way, and I don’t know why. 🤷‍♀️

Very true.

Oh, I meant the band’s statue thing or whatever that was relating to the song you mentioned. Sorry, should’ve c…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

You have synesthesia? That’s so cool! Thanks for your response, I think that’s great that the song leaves that kind of impact on you.

You might have to explain what that thing is though XD.

@theducktator

Thanks for your thoughts. Your most likely right about the self righteous point from which the authors were writing. They did…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Thanks for letting me know lol.

@elishavet-pidyon

Ah, another classical music lover! (The lack of classical fans is alarming). I love classical, and somehow enjoy rock as well XD. Thank you, Paul’s passage is very applicable here.

You mentioning rock and rebellion reminded me of one boy who, before converting, loved heavy m…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Thank you for the concern, it’s so kind of you! Your right on the money, I have noticed I’ve become a bit obsessive/overly scrupulous about things recently, so as you mentioned I will look into OCD.

@linus-smallprint

Huh, that’s interesting about the instruments. I’m not still completely sure why I felt uncomfortable listeni…[Read more]

@esther-c

Hey, I finished your book, and it was really good! I loved the part where Hallie stands up to Katrina and is able to talk to Patrick, I’m glad Patrick turned out to be a generally good, if a little misled, guy. The ending campfire scene where it reflects the beginning is good too, I like how it goes back to the beginning but you can s…[Read more]

@kydonandwillow

I feel like I’m just getting the hang of things and now it’s ending!

So relatable lol, and it goes by too quick.

I would love that. I am going to start editing it soon, but I’ve been so busy.

Cool, I’ll check it out soon.

@kydonandwillow

Hello, I’m Shadow, nice to meet you, welcome back to KP! Congrats on finishing your first draft! How has high school been?
If you want, I’d be happy to look at your new draft.

@esther-c

You’re welcome, and now that I’ve finished this next section here’s a few things. This was really strong, it’s great you’re making Easton and Hallie struggle with the fact that Tyler’s dead and not making them coming to terms with it instantaneous. It’s realistic, and you’re doing a good job at it. I think you could maybe delve int…[Read more]

@jonas

Got it, thanks!

@hybridlore

Thank you, and thanks for letting me know!

@ellette-giselle

Some stuff happened, so I’ll probably be posting the first chapter later today.

@keilah-h

Lol, if he has them XD

@jonas

I’ll check it out (thanks @hybridlore for tagging).