TheShadow

@jonas

Okay…… I put yes…. but that honestly depends on what kind of time I have. I may have to drop back to feedback…. or nothing.

@liberty @theshadow @grcr @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @theducktator

I guess this is everyone who’s voting! :3

Thank you so so so so so much! All of you! It means so much that you guys read through our chapter, (Shadow’s and Mine) And that you voted! TYSM! Thank you so much!

It makes me really happy and excited! Thanks!

We might have to…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Wait really!!!!

*jumps around cheering*

Yahoo!!!!

@whalekeeper

I’m confused…what gave you the impression that Sef is stronger than most people the Pythonos use? that wasn’t my intent at all…

The whole point of the chapter was to show more of her weaknesses and now I’m confused XDXD

@keilah-h

Oh, I write all of the above plus some. idk. The MC is a teenage guy in most of it, but then so were Joseph and Aaron. 🤷🏼‍♀️

@keilah-h

Aw thank you so much!!! I can’t wait. Yay! One member has joined the team!

What do your brothers love so much about it?

I hope you can discover that, because I don’t know…………

@hybridlore    @keilah-h

Thank you, thank you, thank you very much. *twirls hat dramatically because for some reason that is the mental image I have* Feedback like this is always super helpful.

In answer to Hybrid’s question, this book is about the length of the first one with the middle two being the longest. I just submitted really bi…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Yeah it was pretty short hahaha

thank youuu

@theducktator @keilah-h @whalekeeper @grcr

I just released a new chapter…(chapter 35) and I’d just like some thoughts on it lol

so if you want to read it…

https://editor.reedsy.com/s/p8SdhuQ

@freed_and_redeemed      @hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @linus-smallprint

QUESTIONS!

Characters:

~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

~ Were there any character that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do tha…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

THANK YOUUU (:

@whalekeeper

I need to think a little more, and I’ll be sure to tag you when I have something!

@grcr

Thanks girl! IT HAS BEEN A WHILE!!!!! I’ve missed you *hugs*

@theducktator

First of all, girl, I love you so much 😂😂💜😭

You’re the best and your personality is actually such a vibe hahaha

I appreciate you so much, you make me smile <3

The thing is, if I make myself write as a routine, it will seem like a chore. Plus life is very crazy and uncertain because of all the stuff with my mom and I don’t want to…[Read more]

@jonas

Okay I’m in!!!!

I need some MOTIVATION

@highscribeofaetherium @theducktator

Thank you so much <3

@theducktator @whalekeeper

Melissa

“I goeth out of this tunnel… -eth” Mel wiggled the rest of the way out and retrieved her stick, which she had left by the burrow’s entrance. She looked the girl who had just appeared up and down with her flashlight.

“You talk funny. But I like your cape. I’m Mel.”

I’m having more fun writing this imp guy than my actual characters lol

@whalekeeper

Melissa

As Mel followed the rabbit, it began picking up speed, and she found herself jogging to keep up with it.

There was something up ahead. A thin line across the path, reflecting silver in her flashlight beam. Mel slowed slightly, hopped over it, and continued running. Ahead, the rabbit turned suddenly right, and disappeared…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I will. It’ll be a bit odd this time because I feel like I already asked most of them on LOS. I should have a few though.