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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 47 minutes ago
You are very welcome.
And remember…. I know where you live now…. I will hunt you down and I will find you if you do not post more soon.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 hour, 2 minutes ago
YAY!!!!!
Oh wow!!!
I love this!!!
Okay, two things I noticed.
One, you used the word “fell” twice in one sentence referring to the pen.
two… I got the characters mixed up a bit….
Brin and Brinni are the same person.
Krazsimir and Kras are the same….
who is Vrati?
Is he a third character?
If so, could…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 hour, 7 minutes ago
You got the section from today I’m assuming….
Or did you write that in reply to what I said yesterday?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 hours, 22 minutes ago
@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION
Sorry this is so short. Bridal shower and 3 graduation parties……… plus more. It’s a crazy day……..
The next morning, Leon and Julian enjoyed a hearty breakfast with Amarin, Adeline, and Andreas.
“Ho…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 hours, 26 minutes ago
Of course. I’m thankful God could use me to encourage you in any way. He will help you, if you but ask.
Here’s the full verse and reference.
No trial has overtaken you that is not faced by others. And God is faithful: He will not let you be tried beyond what you are able to bear, but with the trial will also provide a…[Read more]
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Potato reporter replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 hours, 1 minute ago
Wow… thanks…
“he will place no burden upon you that is too great to bear”
woah… that was kinda crazy to read…. that means that anything that is happening in my life, if I fail to succeed with it, or give up… it is my fault. And God knows that I could have succeeded if I tried harder, and put in my work and eff…[Read more]
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Potato reporter replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 7 hours, 5 minutes ago
“Ohhh, I see ya now. Hmm… I’d be… I’d be really mad at them.” *a pause* “Besides turning them in tho, there’s still nothing I could do besides, like, be mad at them.” *cackles* “Oh, man that’s so crazy. I’d be such a ball of anger and sadness.” *cackles some more*
Hm… (talking to GRCR, sorry that I keep asking your character thi…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 13 hours, 6 minutes ago
Well hey, God has made you this age at this time for a reason. The Devil would love for this year to be a complete and total wreck, but the good thing is, you serve a King who is far higher than any prince of darkness. Pray for strength, get out your Bible and read, (psalms are a great place to go when you’re having a hard time)…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 19 hours, 24 minutes ago
Does anyone want their charrie to meet Dante? I’m about to move him back to the school and he might need a little help
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 4 hours ago
Ya’ll think we’ll make it to the dance before fall?
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 4 hours ago
Felicity
“So you really like animals, huh? The only animals I ever spent much time with were the cows on my old farm…” She smiled at him before turning back to the window.
“Oh, hey, look! There’s a puppy outside.”
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Potato reporter replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 1 day, 4 hours ago
Oof, Wyoh was probably hacking you computer or smth XD
“Awh, yeah, nah. It’s good—not offended at all.”
Phew! Well, nice!
*laughs a little in a half embarrassed half remorseful way* “Well… yeah… I-I mean… yeah…”
Well, it’s okay… I guess… I think everyone could be a little bit of a bully from time to time.
*Flaz laughs a little* “…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 5 hours ago
as a character
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 5 hours ago
it’s an alternate Europe. If that makes sense.
yeah. That was a roller coaster chapter. Any thoughts on Andreas?
Oooo! I’ll have to listen to the song!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 5 hours ago
Ooo, mysterious.
sadly, he’s not any of those. He was very much an Andreas, so I’ll have to find a name with the same flow, beats, meanings, and rhythm.
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Potato reporter replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 5 hours ago
??? No… I wish I never turned 15… I wish I never turned any age…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 7 hours ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 7 hours ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 8 hours ago
They found thirty of fifty+. The others just are no where to be found. So they might be dead.
And yeah they hated it. It was basically a fortress for the Christian operations.
Ah yes, “I”
Does that make sense?
Yes, it does. In fact, I like that idea. I’ll make a few tweaks.
I was confused through these paragraphs.…
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Potato reporter replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 8 hours ago
yeah… I guess… but like I said, it wasn’t happy. the emoji you should have used is: “😔” It was a self pity party…
but thanks.
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