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TheShadow replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Thank you! I’ll try posting on Thursdays.
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
I’m good, thanks. Thank you for adding me!!
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
Hey!! What’s up, how have you been? I’m really sorry that I wasn’t responding for a while, but I’m just about done with the first part, is it okay if I read and give you some thoughts about the second one? It’s really good so far, Everett is definitely my favorite (always love a musical man).
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
@keilah-h @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @the_lost-journal @liberty @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint
It has been a very long time since I last posted on this topic (3 months apparently). First, I’d like to thank everyone who read my draft; it was a huge help, and helped me re-evaluate my entire story.
Second, I re-evaluated my story and have chang…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Nonhuman Sentient Beings in the forum Fantasy 11 months, 1 week ago
Lol, that’s hilarious! Love the little interaction with Huntress, it’s perfect.
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TheShadow replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
Okay, I’m all caught up (also was gone for a while), and this is a really engaging story. I did feel sad when Tyler was gone, so good job there, and I like how everything is going. A few things, I’ve noticed you used something along the lines of “(Character’s name) hated…” to describe what they were feeling, so changing that up a bit mi…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
If there’s any way I can help, let me know. Regarding the chapter, I’ll try to look at it as soon as possible. Btw, if you’re stuck, take a day or two to let your work sit and come back to it with fresh eyes and let your mind wander. That usually helps me when I don’t know what to do with a story.
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TheShadow replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year ago
Hey, that’s great to hear!!
I’m so sorry. Praying for you and your family ❤️
Praying
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TheShadow replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Thank you, and it’s okay. Hope the meeting is going well!
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TheShadow replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
No, I can’t access the email I sent you. I may be unable to attend this one.
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TheShadow replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
So… I can’t find my phone to access the link…
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TheShadow replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year ago
Why does it feel like the last chapter was more chaotic? Oh well, here are my votes:
D, O, 1, 15, Z.(I don’t want anyone to get out though… sigh…)
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TheShadow posted a new activity comment 1 year ago
@hybridlore Your welcome! Well, Hopefully you’ll get used to it soon.
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TheShadow replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year ago
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TheShadow posted a new activity comment 1 year ago
@hybridlore Man, those kids are lucky lol. My school technically gets off the 6th, when exams finish.
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TheShadow replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Thank you!
I will probably be there, although I could only stay an hour because of something at 4:30.
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TheShadow posted a new activity comment 1 year ago
@hybridlore Thanks for reaching out. I’m doing pretty good, although these last two weeks of school are driving me crazy lol. How are you?
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I’m glad! Yeah, you’re so close!
When do you get off? In two weeks? Interesting, because I think the kids around here get off this week.
I’m doing pretty good too! We just moved a few states over and so we’re still settling in but I’ve been doing pretty good overall. 😊
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@hybridlore Man, those kids are lucky lol. My school technically gets off the 6th, when exams finish.
Oh wow, how was the move? That sounds like a lot, I’ll be praying for you and your family.-
Oh, gotcha. It was pretty good—we’re still settling in like I said, but it’s been a few weeks and our new neighborhood is pretty nice. It’s a lot busier than we’re used to though.
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Thank you!
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@hybridlore Your welcome! Well, Hopefully you’ll get used to it soon.
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TheShadow replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year ago
We gotta get on this bro.
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TheShadow replied to the topic Is there any popular trope or writing style you don’t get the hype for? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 1 month ago
What about antagonists who do the wrong thing, but for a good reason? Or who have a realistic backstory that makes you feel sorry for them, or at the least, understand why they do what they do? Do you just not like characters like that in general?
I guess I should rephrase what I meant because looking back, I actually do enjoy…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Is there any popular trope or writing style you don’t get the hype for? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 1 month ago
So many. Especially from modern stuff.
1. Strong independent woman who doesn’t need help from anyone unless it’s another woman because men are lame anyway. Seriously, this one is so annoying. I can understand writing a woman who is physically capable of taking on tasks, but I hate it when said woman is basically written as a man but…[Read more]
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Oh, gotcha. It was pretty good—we’re still settling in like I said, but it’s been a few weeks and our new neighborhood is pretty nice. It’s a lot busier than we’re used to though.
Thank you!
@hybridlore Your welcome! Well, Hopefully you’ll get used to it soon.