TheShadow

@keilah-h @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @the_lost-journal @liberty @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint

It has been a very long time since I last posted on this topic (3 months apparently). First, I’d like to thank everyone who read my draft; it was a huge help, and helped me re-evaluate my entire story.

Second, I re-evaluated my story and have chang…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Lol, that’s hilarious! Love the little interaction with Huntress, it’s perfect.

@esther-c

Okay, I’m all caught up (also was gone for a while), and this is a really engaging story. I did feel sad when Tyler was gone, so good job there, and I like how everything is going. A few things, I’ve noticed you used something along the lines of “(Character’s name) hated…” to describe what they were feeling, so changing that up a bit mi…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

If there’s any way I can help, let me know. Regarding the chapter, I’ll try to look at it as soon as possible. Btw, if you’re stuck, take a day or two to let your work sit and come back to it with fresh eyes and let your mind wander. That usually helps me when I don’t know what to do with a story.

@rae

Hey, that’s great to hear!!

@savannah_grace2009

I’m so sorry. Praying for you and your family ❤️

@the_lost-journal

Praying

@hybridlore

Thank you, and it’s okay. Hope the meeting is going well!

@hybridlore

No, I can’t access the email I sent you. I may be unable to attend this one.

So… I can’t find my phone to access the link…

@the_lost-journal

Why does it feel like the last chapter was more chaotic? Oh well, here are my votes:
D, O, 1, 15, Z.

(I don’t want anyone to get out though… sigh…)

@grcr @rae

Praying for both your intentions.

@theducktator

Thank you!

@hybridlore

I will probably be there, although I could only stay an hour because of something at 4:30.

@the_lost-journal

We gotta get on this bro.

@hybridlore

What about antagonists who do the wrong thing, but for a good reason? Or who have a realistic backstory that makes you feel sorry for them, or at the least, understand why they do what they do? Do you just not like characters like that in general?

I guess I should rephrase what I meant because looking back, I actually do enjoy…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

So many. Especially from modern stuff.

1. Strong independent woman who doesn’t need help from anyone unless it’s another woman because men are lame anyway. Seriously, this one is so annoying. I can understand writing a woman who is physically capable of taking on tasks, but I hate it when said woman is basically written as a man but…[Read more]

@esther-c

Sorry this took so long to get to. Everything’s looking good (although Hallie is frustrating me a little bit rn). Seriously Hallie, don’t fall for the trap!!

Anyway, the part in chapter 19 when Easton is doing all that stuff over the months, it feels a bit impersonal. Maybe if you wanted to show his character more you could have a sce…[Read more]

@grcr

Elina, what do you value most in a friend/friendship? What would break a friendship for you?

“Authenticity. If your not authentic, your not my friend. I had one friend I broke the relationship off with because she was only being my friend out of sympathy. I hate sympathy. It’s like knowing something, but not really understanding, you kno…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

This is cool, thanks for tagging me!

1. What is your full name?

“Elina Aurelia Miller. My family and friends… whoops, sorry, just my family, call me El.”

2. What is the most important thing the average person should know about you?

“That I don’t care what you think or what other people think. Ever.”

3. What is your body language ri…

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