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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Yeah, definitely a lot of work, but it would be so cool in the end!
Yeah! I hope so!
I remembered one of your drawings being a miner-looking boy with a headlamp and a pickaxe so I guessed they could probably be the same.
Yup! That was Tauren.
I think that I’ll just write the entire thing and then go through and heavily edit it. Al…
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Thank you so much! Glad you like it 🙂
Yeah! graphic novels are a lot of work 😅 I’m looking forward to it though. I haven’t started on most of the drawing of the story because I still have sooo much to learn about drawing people at angles. Yeah! All the character’s I post art of here are from this WIP. In fact I think I’ve got some…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Kaine
“Oh yeah?” Kaine says, noticing Mathews stuttering.
Is he just nervous? Or does talking about his sister make him nervous?
Kaine looks up at the imposing wall. Small rock portions jut out of the side, and it’s streaked coloration shows it’s age.
Have to find Evelyn.
Kaine puts his hand on the wall, feeling for a good spot to grip.…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@loopylin @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings
YES!! That’s a great idea!! Maybe once we get the hang of one group, we can add the sisters. Maybe they’re already in the castle!! Oh yeah, I’ll try to put something other than ‘said’ for Simon. That would annoy me too😂.
Matthew
“Oh, twin! Nice.” Kaine said.
“Umm.” Kaine paused, looking down at t…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@theloonyone @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6
Carter
“Sorry, guys, for ditching you all. I just ah,” The curly haired woman said, addressing everyone. “I don’t know what is going on either and I needed to do something. Maybe if we can get to that castle, thing, we can get some answers.”
“Oh, you’re all good.” Simon answered. (I am…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @theloonyone @loopylin
Ok sooo… I forgot Kaine sisters name 😫 I never came up for a definitive one and forgot my placeholder lol. I’ll pick something that works. Did some searching, lol were going with Everlyn. THIS IS WHY U WRITE DOWN YOUR NAMES PEOPLE!
Kaine
“Y’all are missing some sisters? I’m missing mine too” Kaine…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@loopylin @mineralizedwritings @theloonyone
Oh okay! Lol yea, we should make a group of all the sisters inside the castle!
Matthew
“Yeah. Let’s go,” the boy, Simon said. Then he said, “I haven’t seen your sister, sorry. Carter and I are missing some sisters as well.” My face fell. She was 8 minutes older than me, she was supposed to be taking c…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@theloonyone @loopy-lin @lightoverdarkness
Lol, we seem to have a thing with missing sisters, Kaine has one too 😂🤣
Kaine
“It’s alright, Carter.” Simon reassures him. “We only woke up here a few moments ago. We’ll look for them”
Kaine follows behind the larger group.
Yeah that girls got a good idea.
We need to reach shelter.[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings started the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Hello! So okay, I’ve finally started at the beginning of my book instead of jumping around to whatever I feel like reading. I have a bit over 4,000 words. Don’t feel obligated to read nearly the whole thing, just give whatever feedback you want! Anything helps. I might switch the scenes around a bit. The beginning of my book is pretty sad, but I’m…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 That’s not very long, actually. You should see some of the things freedom and godlyfantasy have written 😆. The longer ones are the most fun to read anyway. @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings
Simon
“Should we follow them? We’ll need a place to sleep and shelter if it rains. And maybe we can find something to eat in that ca…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @loopylin @theloonyone
Lol, Cammie had enough 😂.
Matthew
“I’m Matthew,” I told the red head. “Who are you? Do you know where we are?” I asked. The red head looked me up and down, then said, “My name is Kaine. And no, I have never seen this place in my life.” He looked as if he were about to say something, when I heard a…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
lol ok bye Cammie 👋
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @theloonyone
Simon
As the two boys ran closer, Simon saw that there were four people: three boys, one girl.
“Hello!” Carter called out once they were close enough to be heard.
Three of the new people who had had their backs to them spun around. Simon and Carter ran the last few yards and stopped in fro…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings posted an update 3 years, 5 months ago
Uhhh… so how long does it take KP to moderate a post? I made a lengthy post about my new character, and I’m guessing because I included a picture… it said it was going to be moderated, and the post still isnt up. I posted it yesterday. Not sure if I should keep waiting or re-type everything. ☹
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Light started the topic Book Ideas!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
So, I’ve got this idea for a novel—actually more than one, and I’m trying to figure out if it sounds good. And y’all feel free to add your ideas too!!
So my idea is this: There are two siblings, a boy and a girl, and they are orphans. They live at an orphanage that they hate. Then suddenly one day, someone comes to visit them. It’s an aunt that th…[Read more] -
Keilah H. replied to the topic Hey everyone!! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 5 months ago
@theloonyone Yeah, that makes sense, considering there’s about 25,000 years of Star Wars history counting the EU, although the movies and shows only cover about 60-70 years of time.
@power I love your signature, that’s hilarious. And your black mongoose symbol is cool.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Hey everyone!! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 5 months ago
@theloonyone Ah yes, the Thrawn Trilogy! I’ve heard a lot of good things about it from my friends and a very chatty bookseller I once met, but haven’t read it.
I will admit, the post-original trilogy EU made a bit more sense than the sequel movies. But the thing I liked about the sequels was that it was three movies, then we were done. Maybe a…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Hey everyone!! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 5 months ago
@theloonyone Awesome. As for the Expanded Universe books, I haven’t read many of them. A lot of the ones that happen around the time of the Clone Wars actually could work in the official canon, unlike the entirely deviant post-original trilogy ones.
One of my “interesting tidbits” came from an EU book series though, as an example. Did you know t…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Hey everyone!! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 5 months ago
@theloonyone Yes, I am a big Star Wars fan!! (My brother and dad were watching it when I was nine or ten, and I just sat down and never left. Now I try to find every interesting little tidbit I can about it.)
@mineralizedwritings Hmm, I’m not sure. Although I like the colors on the albino pythons that are sold in pet stores. Does that c…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Hey everyone!! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 5 months ago
@theloonyone YESSSSSSSSSSS I’VE BEEN READY SINCE THE FIRST SEASON ENDED.
This is literally my iPad’s lock screen, some fan art I found:
Oh yeah and it’s cool that you learned it on piano! I used to take piano classes when I was seven or so…..haven’t touched an instrument in a long time though (I’m fifteen now). I did win a trophy for piano p…[Read more]
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@mineralizedwritings I’m not real sure. I’ve heard people say “KP ‘ate’ their post,” but its never happened to me. I was told to copy my reply before I posted just in case it did that. Unless you copied it, you probably will have to type it again :(. Sorry that I couldn’t help much.
Yup. Looks like I’ll be re-typing the whole thing. 😅
(late, as usual lol) Aghh, I know how you feel. I haven’t had a post that had to be moderated yet but I’ve had very very long posts that have been eaten… *sob*
I’ve learned to write my very long comments on a word doc, save it and THEN paste it onto KP and change the formatting. It can be a bit of a hassle but it’s a lot less pain then rewriting…[Read more]
Yep lol, it’s such a pain 😂. That’s smart.