TheLobsterLover

@freedomwriter76 This is best explained with my traced drawing of him.

….Yeah….I chopped off his left arm….and replaced it with a totally cool mechanical one but STILL…. (it’s kinda hard to see)

Same treatment for his bionic eye. He lost it in the same battle, too. I think it looks cool on him, but I have no clue where my brain came up…[Read more]

@hallie-jean @e-m-trepke @power

Rinzler and Feather

“Feather, are you sure this’ll work?” Rinzler asked, but it was too late. Feather was already standing on the Dark Player’s shoulders, reaching up toward the vent.

A loud creaking sounded through the room, and water started pouring in through holes in the walls. “Hurry up,” said Rinzler…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 Yep. I’ve done crazy things to characters in my fanfictions (which happen to be 99% of my writing). On the subject of Marvel, you don’t wanna know what I did to Star-Lord…….

@starshiness Thank you! The name Keilah was that of a Biblical fortress and means “citadel;” and my brother’s name is Ethan which means “strong” so it kind of goes with it….

Also, my dad had the same opinion about Reckless Love, which kinda ruined the song for me when he just straight up said that when my family was listening to the…[Read more]

@starshiness Hi there! I’m Keilah, you can call me K if you want. I like your name, because in one story I wrote, the cat character I had made for myself was called Starshine!

@godlyfantasy12 I think your characters are so cool! I want to hear more about them! (I can see why November’s your good boy. I feel that way sometimes ABOUT CHARACTERS I DIDN’T EVEN CREATE BUT HAVE THE TENDENCY TO TORTURE IN MY FANFICS….WHY???) And two of your characters are siblings, and don’t even know it???!! That’s awesome!

@hallie-jean @power @e-m-trepke

Sorry for such a late response–I was sick this past week or so, and couldn’t really answer. I’m fine now, though.

Feather and Rinzler

“Let’s look for a way outta here,” Dark suggested.

Feather noticed he was especially wary about the room. The holes in the walls did remind her of a trap room which poured water…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I can’t hold them in. *Sigh* maybe a few won’t hurt the system.

What are November’s uncontrollable powers?

How did he escape being killed?

Who exactly is his father?

About how old are these characters when the explosion comes?

Did Eder know?

What color eyes does Corvina have? (Sorry if you already said somewhere and I just…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I. Did. Not. See. That. Coming.

Wow. No wonder his father is so awful…wait. is he really his Dad? (You don’t have to answer if you don’t want to.)

This will definitely stay here!

And now so many questions are piling up in my head that I’d better not start asking any more. The forum may not be able to take it. XD

@godlyfantasy12

YES I DO!!!!!

@godlyfantasy12

(Yeah, I just read the actually helpful stuff, skipped over the rest, and marked out the language with a black pen.)

Oh November! You are putting me into a rhyming mood, which is not exactly safe, at least for my bedtime schedule.

Seriously though, the poor BABY!!

@godlyfantasy12

Go on, go on! *Florishes one hand*

(You’ve read ‘Save the Cat!’ too?)

Poor November…

*deep, heartfelt sigh*

Yep, High Sheriff Slate Protector, Guardian of Miska (a.k.a Granite Watch or, his not so nice names, Phantom and Black Death) is a C in my WIP.

@freedomwriter76

Wow. You just wrote that today? This is first draft? I am…

*Groan*

You painted a vivid picture of this character in my head, and when he screamed I heard him. I have a definite love/hate relationship with this type of character. They wring my heart.

Because they’re real.

They’re all around us.

Their we go! It’s now loaded up top. Here’s also a little pic I drew of Slate 

Here’s a mood board I did of Slate Protector

@freedomwriter76

Awesome!

Yeah, the only good series I’ve found is Promise of Zion, by Robert Elmer.

Weird random question; are your Jewish MCs Messianic, Orthodox, or something in between? (I’m supposing they’re not just by heritage, but they could be, I suppose.)

@freedomwriter76

Thank you!

*Having snooped through all the rest of this board*

I love that you’re writing stories during the healing period after WWII! I haven’t found many good books set in that time (well, besides a couple nonfiction stuff, but anyhoo).

Here’s a collage for a novella I haven’t even hinted at on here, (So conniving) mostly as it has not a working title.

Or character names. For anyone. (I’ve written most of the first chapter without even an idea yet. And I plot. Not pants.)

Anyway, here’s my MC!

@godlyfantasy12

Aaaggghhhh! All I want to do now is somehow drag your published work out of the future, curl up in an invisible corner, and trade this world for A’Grend.

*Sigh*

The impossible wishes of an imagination.