TheLobsterLover

@queen_of_alvastia

Is he okay?

IS HE?!

I need to knoooow!!!!!!

@queen_of_alvastia

*Quiet voice in corner*

What just happened?

@godlyfantasy12

You’re welcome! This is my favorite type of book research too, so thank you!

@godlyfantasy12

Okkaaayyyy…*drags self back from hospital reports*

It looks like the wound is somewhat chronic, frozen in the stages just after bleeding, where the skin is sealed somewhat, but the wound is still open while no longer bleeding. which would make sense if it is painful from time to time. The magic would have to come in here as the…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Ooo, wonderful tension! The things authors love to create yet struggle to write.

It sounds good so far; the emotions seem balanced to me.

How would Ara respond to November being hurt? How did she want to respond to Riven?

At this point it looks like she’s about to explode, which could manifest itself in various ways depending…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I’ll need to check this, but it sounds like the wounds close up, but be scar tissue grows. Anyway I’ll be back on here once I’ve done some research.

@lydia-s

Ooo, here’s one I found recently.

@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76

Oh, by the way, Jareth can talk to Crow sorta the way Jocelyn can talk to Nyx, but it’s not telepathic. Also, Crow doesn’t have feathers, he has spikes and scales. The drawing says “As drawn by Feather” because that’s the name of the character who drew it in the story (she’s Jareth’s…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Vulkasin

Loud voices. The beginning of an argument. Shuffling feet on cold stone.

The barrack…

Something was digging into his side. Vulkasin tried rolling over, but the thing followed his movement. He finally forced open one eye.

The cross piece and pommel on his sword.

Why did I…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 He won’t hurt Nyx too bad. He’ll claw him, that sort of thing, but his claws are too small to scratch deeply because he’s so young. He’s black, and looks a little like this:

(This is a different creature of the same type, called Stormcloud)

His eyes are on the stripe on his face ; they’re an orange-ish color although the drawi…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76

Just going to do Jareth’s POV for now.

Jareth

“I’m Naja!” said the girl who’d found him. “What’s your name?”

“Jareth,” he said, but she didn’t seem to pay attention and was instead focused on Crow.

“Your puppy! He’s cute!”

Crow squirmed, indignant at being called a puppy, but Jareth…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 Nice! And I wouldn’t mind seeing Franz….gives me someone to visualize when I want to smack him…..

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12

Trauma club! I’m in, and so are most of my charries! I sorta like chopping characters’ arms off….Or blinding/half-blinding them…..You get the idea…..

Luckily for them and for you, Jareth and Crosshair haven’t gotten really mutilated yet. Unless you count the time Crosshair was…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 SOOO COOL. And I’m not like a huge Marvel person. I’ve seen a few of the movies and liked them, but they’re outranked by my other fandoms. But your fanfics….are great!!!

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Mikkel

Rat-tat-tat

Screams, loud garbled voices. Zeroing in on his target, safety off.

Another kick shatters the door. Three more steps.

His feet pound down the stairs, racing against time. Flames snatch at his legs, slowing him down.

Another door swings open sending a stream of…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Grimmy? Oh my, that’s… adorable. I can see how Lyn is with nicknames.

(Of course they stay snarky. Brothers are snarky.)

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Mikkel

This room wasn’t a very defensible position, but if the window was filled with sand bags- non-existent sand bags…

Hours upon hours of filling thousands of sandbags…

Mikkel lay down with his back to the door, his rifle beside him where he could keep his hand on it. With his…[Read more]

@queen_of_alvastia

You’re fine! =) It is an interesting tool though, but a hard one all the same.

@queen_of_alvastia

ONLY DO IT IF IT WILL HELP THE STORY! If the book’s good as is I wouldn’t add one just to deepen it.

It may cause trauma you don’t need.

*Weeps*

@godlyfantasy12

I enjoyed that way too much. I mean really, why do I enjoy reading about character deaths? I despise tragic endings, and a book that makes me cry is probably not going to be high on my list of I just want tos.

But that…that was beautiful.

And now I plead for more!!!