@thelobsterlover
Active 1 year, 5 months ago- Rank: Charismatic Rebel
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Apologetics in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 10 months ago
@thearcaneaxiom you can debate an AI?
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Power replied to the topic The Awakening of Halfpaw Protector in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 10 months ago
Yes, he basically broke hundreds of years of tradition and precedence.
Good! I plan to post more in the future.
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Power started the topic The Awakening of Halfpaw Protector in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 10 months ago
Prologue
The jaguar picked up his knife and carefully, methodically, weighed its balance in his paw. It was no longer a toy, his long scar and two missing claws could bear record.With a flick of his wrist he tossed the six inches of sharpened steel up into the air. It revolved once, flashing in the candle light, then, came down like…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @smiley
Eleanor. XD
Jayson“Who are you?!”
Civilians. Great. No firearms necessary. I latched my watch back on my wrist and scrunched my eyebrows at the young lady. Faint British accent, over aggressive manner. Probably scared out of her witts if I had learned anything in Psyc.
Raphael slid his hands in his pockets with a sma…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Note: we are still sorting out Raphael’s family history/denomination, so, besides knowing that they’re very observant, that’s kinda in the air. While he does end up messianic, he’s not quite there yet.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
These two are written in a style that is way not my usual limited omniscient view, part of the reason they’re now joining this castle. So if the voice jumps around a bit, blame Jay.
Jayson Barans
Long gloomy halls after long muggy stairways. Just a few minutes in this place and the dark ages were making a lot more…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Alright, first quick descriptions.
Jayson Barans
Appearance: 5′ 10″, wavy brown hair, hazel eyes, lightly suntanned caucasian. 17 years of age.
Nationality: Canadian American. {Polish, Native, English, Irish.
Pastimes: cross country running, martial arts, books, viola, parkour, firearms.
Religion: Apostolic…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Moonlit Sea and Me in the forum Poetry Critiques 2 years, 10 months ago
Beautiful. The way you used layered meanings of words is making me want to get my violin out and sing. I love the ambiguous speaker who could be just anyone; you, me, a fairy child…it makes my imagination shiver.
I don’t have any real critiques, but as I just ran across this two months after it was posted, I suppose that doesn’t…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Ahh, good. *Sigh* At least he doesn’t break your reader’s hearts too much.
Also, and this is random, but I just love the name Yosef. It’s one of those names that just feels perfect.
*Contemplates whether these two would help calm anything.*
*Crickets*
The more I think about this, would y’all mind if I did add…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
*a stalker appears from the shadows*
Isaiah lost SON? You Killed Judah? 0_0
And Eleanor…what has your author done to you?
*Glances at characters*
*Contemplates inserting two in this sadly mistreated group*
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@jonas i’m so late lol. I’ve just been busy either with classes or this comic book I’m making with a friend.
I’m not going to bother reading the 20 or so pages that have somehow appeared, so just correct anything I get wrong.
Snake
“Do you know how to use a bow?” Ellis asked.
“I’ve used one once. I was a dragonet, all alone in the…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 2 years, 10 months ago
@loopylin ah ok.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 10 months ago
@loopylin awesome art!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 2 years, 10 months ago
@rae nice!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 how did you get it to do that? That looks great!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Help, I Don't Understand Keepers of the Lost Cities in the forum Fantasy 2 years, 10 months ago
@whalekeeper ok, the chocolate frog idea is actually so cute, but a little sad too because then I wouldn’t want to eat it lol. Also it’d probably get dust on it anyway from hopping around. If those were real, I’d probably buy them just to watch them hop around….I could care less about baseball-wizard-whatever cards lol.
Also, who was…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@smiley lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 ok! you can go first cause I have literally no idea what I wanna do lol
also cute profile pic! and a random question, if Bucky rode a dragon, what would he call it? The one I have in mind for him is a color-changing one who’s actually rather peaceful, but can spit flaming liquid. I’ll show you a picture if you’d like.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
also, I have to get off now, so see you all tomorrow or whenever else I get on.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Oooh, the crystal sword idea’s kinda cool.
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