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@freedomwriter76 @smiley

These two are written in a style that is way not my usual limited omniscient view, part of the reason they’re now joining this castle. So if the voice jumps around a bit, blame Jay.

Jayson Barans

Long gloomy halls after long muggy stairways. Just a few minutes in this place and the dark ages were making a lot more…[Read more]

@smiley @freedomwriter76

Alright, first quick descriptions.

Jayson Barans

Appearance: 5′ 10″, wavy brown hair, hazel eyes, lightly suntanned caucasian. 17 years of age.

Nationality: Canadian American. {Polish, Native, English, Irish.

Pastimes: cross country running, martial arts, books, viola, parkour, firearms.

Religion: Apostolic…[Read more]

@overcomer

Beautiful. The way you used layered meanings of words is making me want to get my violin out and sing. I love the ambiguous speaker who could be just anyone; you, me, a fairy child…it makes my imagination shiver.

I don’t have any real critiques, but as I just ran across this two months after it was posted, I suppose that doesn’t…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @smiley

Ahh, good. *Sigh* At least he doesn’t break your reader’s hearts too much.

Also, and this is random, but I just love the name Yosef. It’s one of those names that just feels perfect.

*Contemplates whether these two would help calm anything.*

*Crickets*

The more I think about this, would y’all mind if I did add…[Read more]

*a stalker appears from the shadows*

@freedomwriter76 @smiley

Isaiah lost SON? You Killed Judah? 0_0

And Eleanor…what has your author done to you?

*Glances at characters*

*Contemplates inserting two in this sadly mistreated group*

@jonas i’m so late lol. I’ve just been busy either with classes or this comic book I’m making with a friend.

I’m not going to bother reading the 20 or so pages that have somehow appeared, so just correct anything I get wrong.

Snake

“Do you know how to use a bow?” Ellis asked.

“I’ve used one once. I was a dragonet, all alone in the…[Read more]

@loopylin ah ok.

@loopylin awesome art!

@rae nice!

@freedomwriter76 how did you get it to do that? That looks great!

@whalekeeper ok, the chocolate frog idea is actually so cute, but a little sad too because then I wouldn’t want to eat it lol. Also it’d probably get dust on it anyway from hopping around. If those were real, I’d probably buy them just to watch them hop around….I could care less about baseball-wizard-whatever cards lol.

Also, who was…[Read more]

@smiley lol

@freedomwriter76 ok! you can go first cause I have literally no idea what I wanna do lol

also cute profile pic! and a random question, if Bucky rode a dragon, what would he call it? The one I have in mind for him is a color-changing one who’s actually rather peaceful, but can spit flaming liquid. I’ll show you a picture if you’d like.

also, I have to get off now, so see you all tomorrow or whenever else I get on.

Oooh, the crystal sword idea’s kinda cool.

You know, I should really draw him and a few other characters in a scene or something….that might be fun.

@jonas @highscribeofaetherium ok yeah that’s too funny. oh, and it’s cool how you guys are siblings!

Since he has quite a few guns on him, he’d probably at least teach them how to use them in the event he gets hurt and one of them picks up his weapons.

And he probably would know how to use spears, swords, etc, if only because he’s tried to be…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium @jonas I assume you two know each other lol

@jonas Yes, he has human-like weapons, and advanced ones at that. Pistols, shotguns, grenades, the like. He can also freeze his enemies with icebreath or whip them with the six sharp spikes on the end of his tail. Or punch them.

@rae thanks! I’ve modified him a lot from where he came from. He started as an insane guy who made an enchanted statue of himself to murder anyone who went near his treasures, and centuries later my usual MCs, his descendants, stumbled across his cave quite by accident and nearly got killed. Now, the same story’s been kept, but he now created the…[Read more]