@thelobsterlover
Active 1 year, 5 months ago- Rank: Charismatic Rebel
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 4 months ago
@whalekeeper that’s still not working.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic KP Glitch Problems in the forum Questions and Support 2 years, 4 months ago
@kathleenramm all righty!! Thank you!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@everyone
We should get this back up again, no one’s RPed in a few days.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fairytale AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium yikes!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@theducktator THE FIRST AND LAST ONES LOL
ok, but with a name like “Mcquackles,” are they ducks? Or duck farmers? That’s awesome.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fairytale AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@rae I love how you’ve just decided Mayfly will be her name for the rest of the RP lol
also what the toothpicks is a skinwalker and why is it terrifying????
Jaylen
“Of course you’re a dragon! I’m not stupid, despite popular opinion. And no, no other dragons-” The small creature looked around. “Well, minus the one outside. He doesn’t a…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 4 months ago
@loopylin lol!!!!
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
I’m going to pop in and give my tidbit (because that’s so much more fun than homework).
1. Some scenes need to be short, some long, depending on what’s being delt with. This one may be short, but it’s a good length for the subject.
2. No? It just felt like a wrap up description of Mandin/a scene conclusion/transition to whatever was coming…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
My advice as a middle-grade writer and a YA reader:
1. Stick as much as possible to inner turmoil. Instead of focusing on how much the outward character is being damaged, focus on how the inner character is coping/struggling/whatever.
2. Instead of portraying each individual blow/whatever, gloss it all together into a simple…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fairytale AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@rae does he use “bullets” as an exclamation? That’s hilarious.
Jaylen
Someone barged in as she tried to figure out what exactly was going on.
“Freeze! Wait…are you a Fettian?! I thought I was the only one around here! Bullets, another Fettian ruining my fun. Well, don’t say I’m breaking any rules at any point in time cuz I’m not despite p…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed I will not be mad at you for torturing a beloved character. I’ll be mad at the ones torturing him, but not at you.
I do the same way too much. Just two days ago, I was listening to video game character death screams extracted from their games and imagining what circumstances in an actual linear story situation would…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@theducktator My family had some eclipse glasses left over from the October eclipse (which happened to be on my brother’s birthday lol), so we watched for a bit.
@highscribeofaetherium haha, depending on where you live you won’t have to wait that long. Down in Florida where I’m at, we had one last year also, and seven or eight years ago too.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic KP Glitch Problems in the forum Questions and Support 2 years, 4 months ago
@loopylin lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@loopylin idk, I haven’t been here in a while because my group has long since disappeared.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fairytale AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@rae nice! He looks really science-fiction-y, like something out of Tron, but without the glowing lines and stuff.
also I’m good with fangs, even if they look kinda like a vampire’s. I actually LIKE fangs. Maybe that has something to do with my sharp lower canines.
anyway I’ll RP for Hunter now.
Hunter
She looked straight up at him, her…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic KP Glitch Problems in the forum Questions and Support 2 years, 4 months ago
@loopylin haha you can actually, there are plenty of tools for that
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
Hmmmm…..
Well, she’s gotta meet her dad somehow. How about here?
After realizing what they’re doing to the clones (maybe thinking “oh, I’m next!”), she decides she has to escape. He might try to help her, or talk her out of it.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
Well, you could have her ask him how everyone knows her. He doesn’t have to provide a truthful answer….
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
@evelyn-collins Really?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
@evelyn-collins oooh I just read what you wrote recently! The plot is thickening lol
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