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@ellette-giselle @stephie @whalekeeper @keilah-h @theducktator

Chapter 33 out!

@ellette-giselle

I put the chapter on the drive yesterday, but ran out of time to let people know about it.

@ellette-giselle

I think the first chapter works pretty well! There was a bit of space in between Jonathan’s time in school and him talking to his brother that sort of felt like filler, but I’m not really sure what else you could put there so it might be fine for a first chapter to introduce the characters and the world.

One note: I was very…[Read more]

@liberty

Wow, I really liked reading this! Are you planning to use the characters in a novel?

The POVs seemed pretty different, I think. Obviously, the longer we spend with the characters, the more we’ll get to know them and see their differences, but I got the impression that Zahn was the peacemaker, Kyler likes to tease and instigate things,…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Yeah, that’s understandable. I’m sorry 😢 🤗 But hopefully you have a great time at camp! I’ll continue to pray for you guys!

I’ve been doing pretty good! Just started math again so I can finish my class by next year. So… yeah. 😅

@theducktator Praying!

@koshka Who are they? Astronauts? Fighter pilots?

Either way the boards look awesome!

@savannah_grace2009

One of my youngest friends has cancer. ♥️ It sucks. Don’t let it push people out even if it becomes a normal in your life.

@ellette-giselle
Sounds good to me! Once I catch up with Linus’ work, I can help here, although I may stop at some point to make time for summer activities.
What kind of editing do you want? Super detailed? (Since you said this is several drafts in.) Just a quick read through?

@ellette-giselle awww that’s a shame! I echo Linus here, no one was hurt right?

@jonas

Okay sounds goodie.

*scurries off*

@linus-smallprint

I’ve been a bit busy lately, so I’ve been paused at chapter 15 for a while. I’m still interested too, just need to start up again… as soon as i get some time.

@ellette-giselle

Oh no! No one was hurt though?

@theducktator

Awesome!

@ellette-giselle

Crashed? Like a vehicle accident?

@theducktator

My sister accidentally deleted the file, but has now restored it. You should be able to use the link now.

@theducktator

If you need to finish your school first, I think she will understand

@ellette-giselle

Understandable. With the weddings and grad’s you’ve had, I know it can be hard to find the time.

@keilah-h @ellette-giselle @grcr @the_lost-journal @hybridlore @theducktator @stephie

Hey, are any of you still reading through my sister’s book?

@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h

Chapter 32 out!

@ellette-giselle

Wait until I am back on please.