FIREQUACKER

@linus-smallprint thanks!

@keilah-h

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@keilah-h

You can’t comment? I can go fix that.

It’s a shame we can’t comment yet. I have some good ones.

@linus-smallprint ok! I’ll go read it!

@keilah-h

I didn’t! Where’s the appendix?

Right after the story in the same document

@ellette-giselle

Hey! Scythe! My dad and brothers LOVE that game. Funny thing is, I can’t stand it, but I’m the one that got them into it by buying it for them. 😂 Weirdly enough, I was picturing this kingdom like the scythe art, so that’s super funny.

It is a neat world, and the artwork is very good (though I wouldn’t recommend looking the artis…[Read more]

Did you see that note in the appendix explaining what he is?

I didn’t! Where’s the appendix?

@keilah-h

Isaiah really does have a wonky moral code, ngl.

I know. But that’s what makes him interesting and why I had to write this down.

I like how the perspective is that of the not-dog, whatever he is. Him getting distracted by the food was hilarious.

Did you see that note in the appendix explaining what he is?

@ellette-giselle

https://drive.proton.me/urls/23F48VDN88#loAxe5eW0Gli

This link should work for you

@ellette-giselle

Your computer:

@keilah-h

Okay. I fixed that. Thank you!

@savannah_grace2009 Have fun!! 😁

@liberty

I definitely got that difference, but having you explain it helped even more.

Is Jace younger than the others? You described him as a boy multiple times.

Guy… we didn’t really get much there, but I got the impression he is haunted by his past. Lol.

@keilah-h

I haven’t, sorry. She’s kept writing it thoguh, right? I might go back and catch up.

Thank you! She’s entirely finished book one in this series, and the full thing should be in the document.

@ellette-giselle

I’m fine, and they’re fine. Was pretty shaken up, but also weirdly cool.

Okay. Glad to hear that!

Gave me some insight into writing adrenaline charged characters.

Of course you would come out of an accident and say this!

I know this is a massive article I’m sharing, lol, but I’ve agreed with anything I’ve read from this website (and everything I’ve seen/read at the Creation Museum and Ark Encounter). This article explains why they believe the earth was created in six literal 24-hour days.

And to answer the question, I am also a young-earth creationist.

@savannah_grace2009

❤️❤️❤️

@jonas

I have a bunch of trips that I’ll be gone for, but you can start without me!!! I’m just not sure how available I’ll be until my schedule frees up in July. And I’m sure I can pop on every now and then in between being gone lol

@savannah_grace2009

I’ll keep watching from the shadows and once the draft is over I’ll give you more input on that XD

Yes please do!