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@hybridlore

Which plot twist? The one about Jonas’s dad?

Yep

@ellette-giselle

It’s based off the book Fahrenheit 451 which I really want to read, but I haven’t yet, so I don’t know if it’s clean.

I read most of it at a getaway house by the ocean (one of my favorite recent memories), and it was a fun read. I didn’t finish it but at the time I ha…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I was not expecting it at all!! 😂🥺

@ellette-giselle

Ahem. Sorry. I meant to say, I don’t know if the glitch is on my side or yours. Probably mine.

and yeah, I could access the chapters, it just took a sec to reload so maybe that’s what I needed to do yesterday.

Now… 314???????!

And Jonathan!!!!

nothing to note in these really. I enjoyed them.

@ellette-giselle

Yeah, I literally felt a tear at the goodbye scene. And I don’t usually cry reading things (at least, not fiction).

Can’t wait for the next chapters…!!

It would. I don’t know. I’d have to ponder for a while. no promises. I’ve already got me hands full atm… but the temptation is great.

@grcr It would be such a cool comic!

@ellette-giselle

Ohhh, gotcha.

I don’t know, let me check.

@loopylin

*Bounces up and down because I just researched this* Make full summary of the mystery solution and the story behind it. Something like, “the old lady killed the doctor. She raised alligators in her home because she was a reptile researcher. She trained the alligators to do this, and this, and this. Her plan played out like this. She did…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I was going to, but it wouldn’t let me sign in with my alt account and I didn’t want my main on there for all to see.

I don’t think I’ve heard of Equilibrium—is that a movie or a book?

@whalekeeper

Which plot twist? The one about Jonas’s dad?

@ellette-giselle

It’s so sad… I love 314 so much.

Also. random thought. this would make such a great manga/comic.

(Agh.. no, I’m not about to cry. totally not. not at all.)

@hybridlore

also, have you read the Giver? This book reminds me a lot of that so far.

Dystopian classic. *Sighs emphatically* I remember reading one of the plot twists as a nervous little thirteen-year-old and freaking out. Really good book.

@ellette-giselle

It was right around when Sara burst out at Jonathan.

I don’t know… I like Don. 😅 And Jonathan.

also, have you read the Giver? This book reminds me a lot of that so far.

@ellette-giselle

It worked!

I liked these chapters. You did a great job of increasing the tension. I did notice that you briefly switched into Sara’s POV during the first chapter, then went back to Jonathan. I would fix that.

Great job!

@godlyfantasy12

Godlyyyy

You’re here, madam ghost. I see you on the Currently Active bar.

@ellette-giselle

They’re not showing up on the link for me.

@ellette-giselle @stephie @whalekeeper @keilah-h @theducktator

Chapter the 34th out!

@liberty

Gotcha.

@keilah-h

Fr. I don’t want characters to agree with me all the time, because then there would be nothing to think about.

@whalekeeper

Life be like that sometimes.

lol

@whalekeeper

Isaiah’s “code” doesn’t bother me. I mean, it would bother me in real life.

ehhh that’s characters in morally compromised settings for ya though.

Even your absolute favorite will most likely always, always say something that you don’t quite agree with if their plot has to do with them dealing with, or being, questionable people.