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Felicity replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Could you elaborate? When you say “searching for the mysteries of God, or to have a relationship with Him”, are you meaning searching for it’s own sake, vs doing it to have a relationship with Him?
(Yes, that’s what I meant.)
Can you have a relationship with someone if you don’t know them? (You don’t need to know all of God’s mys…
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@loopylin @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings
Sorry! I’ve been meaning to do an Rp for Serin! I can’t right now but hopefully later!
@freedomwriter76 @thearcaneaxiom
Did you write Viola? I think I missed that so I’ll have to go back and read that before I do Uvah
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E. M. Trepke replied to the topic The Purpose of Literature in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 years, 1 month ago
@thearcaneaxiom @soleilnaia @light-warrior-pen
Thank you all for your thoughts! They were quite helpful!
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whaley replied to the topic Does this dialogue (and ImPOrtAnT MomEnT) feel natural? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Hehe, yeah you guys are right, it’s probably a lot harder to follow without context. My only excuse for not giving you guys an earlier scene, is that I’m not completely satisfied with the beginning.
Thank you! I thought you would be best to judge worldbuilding 😉
Yeah, I have mentioned this story before. Lol, I bet…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Does this dialogue (and ImPOrtAnT MomEnT) feel natural? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Holy toothy cow, that was long. Sorry.
Tagsies?
@mineralizedwritings @loopylin @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @folith-feolin @thearcaneaxiom @esther-c @keilah-h @anyoneelsewannareadthismouthfulofasnippet?
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Euodia replied to the topic The long and tedious character naming process… in the forum Characters 3 years, 1 month ago
Oooooh, okay! 😁 That makes sense now. Thanks so much!
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
You’re fine! Any help is appreciated, and you’ve never come off like that.
Also, if you ever do post a chapter of your WIP, I would love to read it and offer any advice I can!
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Full honesty, I started this WIP maybe a couple months ago, so it’s not very far along yet worldbuilding-wise🤣. These are all things I’m going to have to work out. Thanks for mentioning them, because it makes things so much easier when I can have some kind of list of things to tweak or change.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
They hold them to the side. My original thought was that it would be awkward- and would look strange- for them to hold it straight out. Not to get into too much detail but an enemy could just shove the handle down their throat… Yeah, so to the side. Besides, in most battles (there are few for the Felisaro anyway, as they don’t…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Wow! Thanks for the great advice! (And the more critiquing the better. it really does help)
To answer your question, yes, Quelin is definitely going to be a big part of the story. As for the whole thing about the thumbs, the Felisaro had to be extremely inventive to get past that. They basically started out with…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
@thearcaneaxiom Fair point. Although this might have not been a current thing–perhaps it happened in the past, and the arcanin quickly settled it….and that helped the felisaro too, even if it wasn’t intended.
@kyronthearcanin If you don’t want to listen to our suggestions over the course of this discussion, you don’t have to! We’re just…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
@thearcaneaxiom Oh, I meant it as more of prejudice than actual truth. I mean, we’ve seen they don’t like halflings, and we’ve seen the serpenree treat the lupinari with contempt.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
@thearcaneaxiom Your point about Dune not having thumbs is interesting, considering the fact that Quelin and Rina apparently have them? @kyronthearcanin Is that a major point in the story? Like maybe the other species used to (or currently) look down on the felisaro because they’re “lesser” or “not as advanced” because they don’t have thumbs.
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Light posted a new activity comment 3 years, 1 month ago
@thearcaneaxiom Aww, thank you so much!! I really needed to hear that. 😊 I appreciate all the kindness you and your sweet family has shown. It means the world to me. 💖💖💖
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Light posted an update 3 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12 @esther-c @euodia-vision @felicity @gwyndalf-the-wise @sarafini @whalekeeper @loopylin @princesachronicle22 @thearcaneaxiom @any-one-else
Hey y’all. Can y’all just please pray for me and my family? There’s some stuff going on, I can’t really go into detail, but I’m worried, and kinda…[Read more]
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Folith-Feolin replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Hey guys interesting question here what do you think of this statement?
If democracy represents the collective conscious of those who can vote then would it not be the fault of the Christians that the collective conscious is been trending away from Christianity for the past 50 years? And thusly it would…[Read more]
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Euodia replied to the topic The long and tedious character naming process… in the forum Characters 3 years, 1 month ago
Thank youuu! Ohh, I think I was confused when you asked if I prefer ‘real world roots’ or not. I didn’t know you were asking about roots in a specific culture. Oops! 😅 My goal is not to make all of the names geared towards one culture, but in general, just be intentional with the meaning of everyone’s name. Like, as long as the…[Read more]
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Folith-Feolin replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
for finding the validity of news sources I find these sights helpful
KP only let me post one link per a post (I don’t know why)
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Folith-Feolin replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
for finding the validity of news sources I find these sights helpful
https://www.allsides.com/unbiased-balanced-news
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Otherworldly Historian replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
(Thanks again for your points, I’d love to continue this debate, but let’s make sure not to let it turn into an argument. This has turned from theology and philosophy to more of just politics though, something I don’t feel as edified by in discussion.) Are there other questions that you would like to explore instead?
(I agree…[Read more]
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@freedomwriter76 Thank you sister!! That means so much to me. ❤️❤️❤️ Aww girl!! That brought tears to my eyes. Thank you so, so much!!
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Girl I’m so sorry! I know that stuff can be scary, if you ever need to chat I’m here for you! 💗💗 Just remember that God never fails, even when the people around us might. I will be praying for you! <33
Here's a little cat to maybe make you happier?
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Maybe this one?
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Oh no! Idk what happened to this one, looks a little bit like Lays…[Read more]
@freedomwriter76
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@mineralizedwritings
Aww thank you sister!! Thank you so much!! 💗💗💗💗
And oh my goodness, those cats are so cute! And the Layson expression…and the Matthew one XD.
Thank you for bringing a smile to my face.
@lightoverdarkness6
Yw! <333
That was my hope 🙂
I know it's an awful feeling when you haven't smiled in too long.
What are you up to rn? School? Writing?
@mineralizedwritings
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I’ve finished school for the day (thankfully 😅) and rn I’m just writing a few RPs in the castles and I might write some in my actual book, idk yet.
Thank you for asking! 😊
How about you?
@lightoverdarkness6
oh nice! A wonderful feeling when you’re done with schoolwork XD
What part of your book?
Idk actually! Just hangin around kp! I need to work on an animation I was working on awhile ago, I’m having a little bit of a hard time moving forwards because it’s a real sit down and grind kinda thing at the beginning.
My mom and I…[Read more]
@mineralizedwritings
Yes it is!! 😀
The 3rd chapter, lol. It’s when I first introduce Matthew and Lyla! So I’m excited 😊
Fun!! Haha, yeah, animation seems really hard. I love the look of it tho!! Yeah I get that 🙂
Ooh!! Awesome!! I hope y’all have an amazing time! What movie? Do y’all know?
@lightoverdarkness6
Oh nice! Wait.. they aren’t introduced till the 3rd? Who does it start with?
XD maybe if I put on an audio book. Have any recommendations? lol I never know what to listen to
Thanks so much! It’s puss in boots the last wish, it’s being praised like crazy among the animation community and I just had to see it XD have you seen it?
@mineralizedwritings Haha, yeah. It starts with chapter one, Asher, chapter two, Iris, chapter three, Matthew, then chapter 4, Dylan.
Hmm, just like any audio book? I really like the Green Ember, we have that one on audio! Or maybe the Wingfeather Saga…idk? Theres lots of good books out there that you can find on audio books! There’s a…[Read more]
@lightoverdarkness6
oh nice!
Well sadly I ended up trying the ascension series again, It got kinda creepy, I read to much more and now I’ve got that nasty rock in my stomach. Ugh. Thanks for the suggestions! I’ve read both, and their pretty good. I stopped the green ember series at the third book because I just couldn’t get into it and I felt like…[Read more]
@lightoverdarkness6
Sorry I didn’t see this earlier! I’ll definitely being praying for you and your family! ❤️❤️❤️
Aw, I really appreciate you too, girl! I know that since I’ve been here you’ve been really encouraging to me. =)
@gwyndalf-the-wise No you’re good girl! Thank you!! Aww, I’m glad. You are so sweet ❤️❤️❤️
Your in our prayers! When things seem to be going astray, just don’t lose faith! The Lord loves you and your family so dearly, and has a plan for you. Whatever happens, just never forget to show the light you’ve already so humbly let shine to all those around you. You have such a sweet, gentle, and powerful spirit, and I know that the Lord will…[Read more]
@thearcaneaxiom Aww, thank you so much!! I really needed to hear that. 😊 I appreciate all the kindness you and your sweet family has shown. It means the world to me. 💖💖💖
@mineralizedwritings Oh, I’m sorry girl!! I hate that feeling 🙁. Maybe say a little prayer, that will help. 😊
Yeah I’ve never read it, and I probably never will, from what I’ve heard of it.
Yes, The Green Ember isn’t like the best, but me and my little brother really enjoyed it, so I guess that’s why I still like it. Honestly, at times it felt a…[Read more]
@lightoverdarkness6
Yeah XD
Movie was really really good. Could have done without the bad guy using a crystal ball/ other magical things, but it was overall really good. The animation was great, I liked the characters, and the jokes were actually funny. Tbh the themes were really good too. It felt really tight knit if that makes sense,…[Read more]
@mineralizedwritings Cool!! Yeah, there’s always a little something magical. Oh okay! I’ll have to watch it sometime! 😀
@lightoverdarkness6
I don’t recommend watching it with younger siblings unless they can take some scary stuff XD
(I believe there’s some bleeped out swear words too but I left to go to the bathroom during that so I have no idea how bad it was lol)
@mineralizedwritings Oh yeah, definitely not XD. Especially the 5 year old. Yeah, probably. I’ll have to research some more about it before watching it, lol. Thank you for the warning! 🙂
@lightoverdarkness6 Aw I’m sorry that’s happening. I’ll pray for you! I’m sorry I missed this notification until now. Depression isn’t fun, but God can help you through it if you let him. Just take it a day at a time. I’ll try to pray for you often and I hope you get though this soon!
@lightoverdarkness6 Of course girl!! Always praying for you <3 <3
I’ll be praying for y’all!! ❤️🙏🏻
God’s always there for you. I know how it feels to be worried. (Don’t we all?) God is the greatest comfort that I’ve found. Just keep your eyes on Him. His love never fails. His faithfulness is great. Keep relying on Him. I know He’ll work mightily in your life. I’ve seen Him work in my life and others’ life.…[Read more]
@loopylin @princesachronicle22 @esther-c
Thank all of y’all so much!! I feel a lot better now. Love y’all!
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I’m so glad!! 😊❤️
Aw praying for you all! Amen to everything everyone else said! ❤